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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    The mild and cloudy climate
    from which i came
    left me gentle melancholy
    impressions of what passions
    had offered me in the generous
    eyez of your beauty
    like the sun bronzed glazzin

    I know how to love and how to suffer
    inside the stance of a woman
    my heart calls in melodies beating
    rapidly in the indingo drums
    as i stand alone as Mandingo king
    i do not know to combat your passion'
    or share in it , for one might not love

    Inside your glance of warmth my arms
    open to embrace the hope of we
    and yet i know not the truth that we are
    with deep desires and loyality i cry out
    calling you in tempts that you may hear
    shell i just see you about or
    shell i definitely see you ? beloved .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we feel love so deeply, it makes us feel vulnerable. We want to somehow step into the other's mind and heart to know for sure that they feel the same. Of course we can't really do that. But it's worth it to definitely see that person, to find out that the one you love, loves you just as much. Beautiful write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes watz is it really hard to see inside the heart of another when your heart
    is on that person , can it be felt or is it just a saying beyond compare in depth
    Thank you dear sister seem like you know my heart so well .....................
     
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    Beautiful piece poet...and surely she will appear.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let her not be in vein but a better me i see in reflection.
    Thankz Queent for the visit and love on this ...............
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Will you Be...or will that be left to the memory......Great poem Poet $$RICH$$
     
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    Thank u so kindly
     
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    I seek her and hopefully i shell fine her at the edge of my exsitance
     
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    tyte poem. seek and you shall find. most of the time what we want is right in front of us, we just dont know it yet :)
     
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    I know how to love and suffer in the stance of a woman????

    wow!

    Quite a spectacular exhibition of words.
     
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