Black Poetry : Quest.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by anotha_LEVEL, Aug 28, 2005.

  1. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    Left defunct on a road where dead souls are thrown
    Discarded like used contraceptives conception awaits at tha crossroads with ressurection
    Blown in tha zone on tha way home I felt prone to rebirth facing danger
    To my right strangers look up to tha sky and ask forgiveness for they wrongs
    Bong smoke playing PONG in tha lungs of pre teens
    Defeating chances of creating a sequal to tha black panthers
    Dancers strip for dough trapped cause they don't think they can do mo
    Silent like cancer........ walking lifes tightrope wit legs of a spider
    Higher can I travel wit a walking stick putting letters together like Scrabble
    Sinners preach tha pycho babble only to dabble in devilish ways
    Working hard never to get paid
    What is it?
    The reason for the questions.......the answer for tha parental discretion
    Disection of tha ego.........repo ya freethrow....... biting tha hand that feeds us now we got no mo chances
    We got romances...... wit no love........ we in love wit tha thought of a love that was bought
    Quest for knowledge is summin that will forever be sought.



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribe
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    do continue and share give love within happy u join us
    welcome to the family!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some look for the things that matter in the wrong places, and that's a thankless quest. I really liked the way you brought your message. Welcome to destee, I'll be waiting to read more from you.
     
  4. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    I'd like to thank ya'll for tha support of an up n coming poet

    much luv



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  5. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your name doesn't lie, Your definitely on another lines. You have some great rhymes and lines.
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well spoken words of knowledeg and great flow! :star: :star: :star: :star:
     
  7. Kamau~

    Kamau~ Active Member MEMBER

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    word....this was def...flo sum mo
     
  8. anotha_LEVEL

    anotha_LEVEL Active Member MEMBER

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    thank u all

    I will flow some more soon.

    I luv tha luv on this site.
     
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