Black Poetry : Quenchless Utopia..

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its not that way ......
    can you name it?
    I dont have the answers...
    do you?
    I cant explain it...
    can you....?

    Who are you.......

    Where did it droped..
    Where did it Popped...
    was i able to stop?
    How did it end..
    where did this began.?
    where did you let go of my hand....?

    Wasnt it farytales...
    or was it exactly that....?
    This is crazy.....

    Wasnt it you and me ?
    or was it ....
    not...?

    Lord what is this ..a trill an exciting mystical song...

    Did you somewere get Tired ....?
    and dim the Lights..
    probebly i did to...

    What was it between you and me baby...
    Desire dementions..
    soft intentions..
    we could not hide...
    Did it dissapear with in a blink of an eye..
    It brought Pain but also Joy in my LiFe...
    ....
    in yours ?

    Is it all about Love...?

    a Part of His great Plan....?


    I dont understand....

    I dont understand...

    I dont understand.....



    hear me..almighty...

    i dont understand...




    Al that is left of me....
    are pieces of questions..


    with answers unrevealed...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling it sis
    soon it will all
    come to light
    tyte write
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes sister liberty...
    nice it was tight..
    flow on....:angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to explain the unexplainable--no easy task. Nice write.
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with it too, blind as a bat but lovin' that!
     
  6. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NICE! PIECE/PEACE!

    Questions,questions,questions...Nicely structured, so serpentine
    with twist and turns...I like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Blessings On Your House!
     
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