Black Poetry : Queentswana & MzBlkAngel Presents...You lost

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ....The best thing you ever had

    Queentswana

    How do I start this, what can I say...
    I woke up this morning, to a brand new day
    but...
    You keep me in tears, it matters not, how I felt
    but what seems old to you...
    is new to somebody else
    and I'm here to tell you...
    ...you lost
    the best thing...
    ...you ever had

    I gave you several chances, to read my mind
    sorry baby, it's now too late, I'm leaving you behind

    In the quiet of the night, when you are yearning for my touch...
    but where were you, all the nights...I needed you so much?

    When it came to you, I was your "every women" ,
    and where you're trying to take me, I already been

    Yeah, I did my share of crying, and feeling sorry for myself,
    but I checked my "Inner" feelings, to see what I had left
    you know what...
    ...I got it going on
    I want to dance now, to somebody else's song

    I'm going to whine, bind and grind his soul
    whisper some ****, he ain't never been told
    Oh yeah,
    I was a bitter black woman, but I'm no longer mad
    so, as it stands now...
    you can tongue kiss my ***
    cause...
    ...you lost
    the best thing
    ...you ever had

    MzBlkAngel

    Thinking I was easy
    Now what you say?
    You lost the best thing you
    …….you ever had.

    I cared when no one else did
    Sat up with you all night
    But…
    I guess you forgot

    Knowing…

    I reached for you, but….
    You decided to turn your back
    Not sorry baby that you lack…
    To see what you had.

    The long talks and plans
    Were pieces of a dream you built
    …but you ran I guess you got scared
    Of what was reality…
    Your desire became mind
    Baby, we could of shined

    I may cry a while, even be bitter
    But I am stronger, then when
    …..you meet me

    Knowing….

    That Your lost treasure
    Is now another man’s pleasure
    …in time
    I will love him with every measure

    Your lost but my gain
    In my pride
    With a brand-new stride
    For I know, I am a Queen
    You just didn't know what you had
    and **** I aint even mad...


    (c) 2005
    A sister thang
    Dairy of a mad black woman​
     
  2. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: i yALL HURT SOMEBODYS FEELINS BAD WITH THAT ONE :hearthis: MY SISTAHS HAVE OUTDONE THEMSELVES! :welldone: *I PRAISE* :welldone: :great: TOO BAD THOUGH->:happens: i LOVE YOUR COLLABO:bellydance: 4 STARS!:star::star::star::star: iM TELLIN THE WORLD!:gossip:
     
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    Worrrrd :hearthis: lol

    Yanno this rings of Mary J Blige & Eve...NOT TODAY :hearthis:

    well if the fool aint got the message before this would SURE GIVE IT!

    well done sisters ;)
     
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    whewwwwwwwwwww!
    a heart buster right here
    y'all did it again tyte drop sista's
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Sister poet your works are master peace this is painful, and I guess we all have been this route, but the love within us, we must remeber never cast our jewels to the swine.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Great job. :D

    :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    :thanks: for sharing this piece with us...the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    re:Lost

    This is a very beautiful and truthful write. Sometimes you can't stay in the past . you have to search for your new day.
     
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    wow...this collab has left me speachless...
    only great writers can take great pain and make it a work of art...
    both of you have done this with this joint...bravo sistaz...i am in awe

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Very nicely done Sistas. Just one of a number of fine writings from two very talented poetic artists.
    Thanx for inspiring..
     
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