Quiet Poetry Lounge : Queens Rise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Feather, Sep 13, 2011.

  1. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    full of joy​
    traveling swiftly​
    like the clouds​
    changing plains in consciousness​
    above she rises​
    ascending satisfied depressed souls​
    trapped dying in​
    rivers of desire​
    mesmerizing​
    in vanity​
    in a daze at their reflection​
    their hearts neglected​
    hypnotized​
    in fictitious perceptions​
    overwhelmed with pride​
    rise noble queen​
    in ease and in control​
    take back your soul​
    in honor​
    a beauty​
    breathtaking​
    breathless​
    from below​
    hollow souls​
    whisper​
    come back to us​
    to her weaknesses​
    surrender to​
    inhibitions and fears​
    rejection and disgrace​
    smothers their faces​
    she knows the depths of her existence​
    she sheds her light intercepting​
    their arrows​
    of doubt​
    a shot​
    at her heart​
    the miserable​
    missing miserably​
    so...​
    she rises​
    she rises...​
    untouched...​
    untouched...​
    untouchable...​
     
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    Loveliness.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Let rise above and beyond
    let her float unconditionally
    let her behold in depth
    as she rise & rise untouched

    this was so devine beautiful and full of depth (strong script )
    sister Queen Feather
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Again, she rises. Inspired writing.
     
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    like the phoenix...out of the ashes of misery and despair, she rises. NICE.
     
  6. Feather

    Feather Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i made an error... i wanted to just note for those that did read this i replaced "reelection" which made no sense and was a typo with reflection, darn spellcheck:lol:
     
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    MsVeraisblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it was still beautiful tho
     
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