Black Poetry : Queens of Destee series "UbZorbShun"

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Title: "U"topia

    My mind skates on a frozen
    ink pond / beneath me lie
    scribes of "U" / crystallized

    She is the creator of this
    "U"topia where my mind skates/
    screams/dreams of where I'll
    be come Saturday

    Feeling good cause this
    envi(her)ment is where I
    need to be / maybe I'll
    find free /or just catch
    a glimpse of me / breathing
    in her atmosphere /
    and absorbing her "UbzoRB-SUN"
    rays /

    teasing my melanin helping
    me grow into a darker king
    / I kiss her hand / her soul /
    her scribe /

    blakverb style

    and she showers me with
    "U.B" dipped thoughts
    that resemble grapes on
    a vine and I eat them
    One by One

    She fills my mind with
    a piece of her peace
    and blesses me on my
    self-imposed flight trip

    and gives me an eternal pass
    to her "U"topia


    (c)2001 blakverb

    I am much appreciative of your presence in my life, even if we never met.
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak

    No words to describe except one...Outstanding! and that's an understatement!

    This sistah mos def deserves the :heart: !!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Zorb will be truly absorbed by this peace/piece...!

    It's just that damned tight!!


    One :heart:
     
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