Black Poetry : Queen, Revisited

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Have I told you lately, how beautiful you are to me?
    a black well of promise, definitively filling my thirst,
    I swell with pride, contemplating all the things you’ve supplied,
    uplifting me into the man I should have been from the moment we met
    and whether or not I’m there yet, I’m forever growing
    intent to reach a moment when showing you exactly how much I
    love
    appreciate
    cherish

    YOU

    is as easy as opening my mouth, speaking your name,
    marking your soul with our fire
    which we’ve sparked from day one
    fueled with commitment
    keep burning by admitting that there’s no relenting,
    I’m here, for the long haul, 1000%
    because I know you’re my queen, your love is heaven sent,
    like God smiled down on me
    and sculpted your form
    and I’ll do all in my power to greatly inform him
    that each day when I see your sleeping mahogany face
    or pull you in my arms, admiring your grace, your appeal
    all of your charms,
    I am thankful
    supremely thankful
    you are the light in my sky,
    the crutch on which I rely,
    and whenever, wherever, no matter the means
    I’ll always supply you…..with what you need,
    cause I need

    YOU

    so, I thought I’d take the time to
    express my feelings in a special way
    you’re the substance in all I am
    my beautiful, black queen
     
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    GWAN WIT YO BAD SELF!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up!!
    da Queen of ya eye
    that's dat way it pose to be...
     
  4. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love....I appreciate it....everyone the posts here is so talented, so I feel I'm getting feedback from a knowledgeable crowd. Keep scribin' people

    MJ
     
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    when i 1st read this... i coulda swore it was for me!! :lol:

    okay!okay!okay!... i'll stop trippin'. (lol) but! believe me
    when i say that the beauty of this peace... made me
    speech-less. i am soooo very happy to be reading you
    again! :D i see that you still are as talented as you
    always were. don't ever stop writing!! ...promise me!!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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