Quiet Poetry Lounge : Queen of all Queens...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Sep 1, 2005.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is something on my mind, I feel you need to know
    the damage is too great, time for one of us to go

    Didn't I tell you, if you lost me...you'd lose a good thing?
    did you think I'd love anything, less than a King?

    To my heart, soul and body, you committed a sin
    what a shame, our friendship had to end

    ~at least
    the way
    it did~

    I was your personal freak, yet a lady in the streets
    and it's a known fact...you'll curse every girl you meet

    Do as you please, cause I no longer care...
    I now where a :spinstar: smile :spinstar: on my face, and you :nono: didn't put it there

    Yeah, what you had...was the cream of the crop
    Mr., you blew a good thing...
    now, what you got?

    It matters not, how far you travel, or how much you seen
    But I know, that you know...
    I'm the ...
    "Queen of all Queens"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Lady Queen i bow in da essence of yo true realism
    and i lone to touch the heel of a true queen of Queenz

    wow this was power in the mist of speech that's well heard
    one no not da heart nor love of a queen til da well become dry
    she like a vault once closed it's ova ........well verse poeticly sis.
     
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    True indeed!!

    no argument from me...........TRUTH IS TRUTH!
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gone My Sister

    Queen.. u bad.. girl Dat's tight.. yeah he messed up his GOOD thang! Smile on sister!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What impressed me the most about this piece was the strength of your words and the pride that shines through. Do your thang poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it was just one strong powerful and well done piece
    top notch grade sista QueenT
     
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    Wisdom7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Definately from a queen! Nice poem!
     
  8. Khasm13

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    Yeah, what you had...was the cream of the crop
    Mr., you blew a good thing...
    now, what you got?

    It matters not, how far you travel, or how much you seen
    But I know, that you know...
    I'm the ...
    "Queen of all Queens"



    it's the curse of all men to not know what u got till it's gone...lovely prose sis

    one love
    khasm
     
  9. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This should also apply to women as well...Another great scribe from the Queen...Maybe u should put down the hamma and pick up a pen more often...LOL.
     
  10. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queen:
    Another great one. I bet he knows now!!!!

    Flo it sista queen flo it.

    Much luv
     
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