Black Poetry : Quasi-epiphanic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tzevi1278, Apr 24, 2006.

  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Dec 13, 2004
    Messages:
    157
    Likes Received:
    12
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    South Florida
    Ratings:
    +12
    Artistically inclined
    but couldn’t figure out where to draw the line
    in this relationTrip.
    Hallucinogenic fatal sips
    from the able lips
    of a cradles grip,
    stripped of my soul with a finger’s tip,
    pressed softly against
    a mind state from whence
    I was convinced I was sent
    but was unable to repent
    respectfully . . .
    But the mirror wasn’t reflecting me,
    so I shattered it,
    gathered the shards and scattered it
    then with no regard, I was adamant
    in reclaiming self from this savage b1tch,
    she had me thinkin’ I was a worthless soul
    I screamed “FCUK THE WORLD”
    but even Mother Nature’s taking birth control,
    her words were cold,
    but they ignited a flame
    and from that point on,
    I’d never be the same.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,977
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,177
    this was deep and felt
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 18, 2006
    Messages:
    622
    Likes Received:
    7
    Ratings:
    +7
    DANG MY BRATHA!! dis waz deep
    i felt dat anger
    i feel ya, i cud neva be da same eitha..lol


    blackluv and bp
     
  4. Ikoro

    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Norway
    Joined:
    May 23, 2006
    Messages:
    1,177
    Likes Received:
    320
    Ratings:
    +320
    Even Mother Nature is taking birth control.

    Words that stab Truth.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2001
    Messages:
    1,662
    Likes Received:
    29
    Ratings:
    +31
    :SuN031:

    :SuN009:

    Such a good piece. Just keepin it real! hee hee hee

    Lovely, Scribe

    Thanks

    DS
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    When the world trip you up, fall even deeper into what makes you uniquely special. Umph, fathoms deep...
     
  7. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2005
    Messages:
    2,088
    Likes Received:
    38
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Full Time Student and Independant Buisness Owner
    Location:
    Life is waiting....
    Ratings:
    +38
    one moment in life can break a chain of peace or hate
    no one ever knows until they reach their own fate
    but only time can tell where my life ending could be
    but you just were a bump in MY Ultimate ability


    ~PeaceandLove~ Brother