Black Poetry : Pyramid Skids

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Apr 13, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here at the project
    Called Pyramid Skids
    Against all logic
    People live here

    You up and comers
    Who thinks too big
    You want a life...
    A mummy want his

    If it ain't locked down
    Find it here ~
    X - marks the spot
    We open all year!

    The sands of time
    A hustler can't fear
    Too busy preying
    On Black folk, kid

    Hey Baby-Lady,
    What you gots... dear
    Ho' ugly duckling,
    Keep it right there!

    Cause we ain't tryin'
    R-e-s-p-o-n-s-i-b-i-l-i-t-y
    I'm black and happy
    To cop you feelin' me?


    Darryl Abdu Omari
    aka 1poetsought copyright 2004
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop!!
     
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    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats tuff stuff, deep piece here, much felt, good imagery i saw the scene u painted with your words
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa indeed deep u scribe it tyte and bring it i felt this one
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Against all logic, people live here"....this is so deep, and awful, and true....keep the flows coming.
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awful in fact, but *THINK* of the possibilities.
     
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