Black Poetry : Puzzle Pieces of you..

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  1. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You ever wonder what piece you are
    to the puzzle that is another
    where you fit in
    when your always the last piece to be added
    when you are left to the side
    till every other piece in thier life
    has been put in its place
    and you are left there
    looking dead in thier face
    of what inportance are you to another
    where do you fit in thier world
    which is the puzzle
    a part so seemingly minute
    yet a detail that is not to be missed
    where do you fit into the puzzle
    when all you want is a hug and a kiss
    some pieces fit so well
    with all the others
    but i you miss,
    yet the puzzle does not want to be complete,
    because you do not have me,
    I dont fit into your puzzle,
    so why do I care...
    when im the missing piece
    that has always been there.
    waiting for you to see,
    others will try to fit,
    into a space that God made for me,
    but they wont fit rite,
    and will not be as comfy..
    but misery loves company,
    but thats not me,
    Im the piece of your puzzle
    that makes you happy.
    COMPLETE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I know this so well , often been the missing piece to the puzzle
    that makes it complete , maybe oneday i'll be notice and put in
    place to complete the circle of life .
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exasperating to say the least, when you see so clearly what another either just doesn't see, or doesn't want to see. This was cleverly posed, nice to read something new from you.
     
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    My Poetic Angel...I am like you...that "last piece" that is so blatently overlooked and passed up even after they've tried all the wrong pieces ova and ova and ova and ova again...So indeed, I feel this scribe very deeply....
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    yo...this is a slick work...it hits me on multiple levels...like love, work, parents.....a phenomenal write....Im reading a lot into it....
    a very interesting drop, Poetess....
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah sis... I do wonder what piece to the puzzle I am. Nice flow sis!!!:welldone:
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pulled this out the crate because it fits so well right now that i could of wrote this with my own pen. Poet this is a job :welldone:
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i think everybody questions where they fit in at one point
    this is something that will hits home everyone regardless of age, gender, race, etc
    you know that you did something wonderful when you can do that
     
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    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PoeticManifesta - "Where do I fit in?" The answer may not be the one we want. It may not be in the puzzle we think is ours. However, it is always the reality we find ourselves in. You have captured the inquiry of the human heart with poetic clarity that has mystified men and women since men and women began. I enjoyed this immensely. Namyh
     
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    I wonder where my PO-PO is ?
     
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