Black Poetry : putting you on the first page

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Apr 25, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you say I don't pay you attention
    so i'm putting you on the first page
    I've viewed you so many times
    a voyeurist in your prefabricated
    window peeking peering glancing living
    romance vicariously through your
    words so i'm putting you on the first page
    so you'll be resurrected once again.

    (c)2001 blakverb "off da top thinking"
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go back and pull me up

    from the 2nd, 3rd, 4th and 5th pages of this board then!!...and oh, by the way, don't just view -- post a reply while you are at it! You've got to keep up with me
    dear!

    :heart: ya'... :lol:

    This "quickie" is right & tight-Blak....as always~
     
  3. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayummm, yeah diggin' this piece heyah, dear poet.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WATCHFUL EYE

    IS WATCHING FROM ABOVE
    TYGHT STUFF DESPLAYED
    U SEE ALL .....VIBE POET.
     
  5. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely put

    sweet flow...

    i live to be first on your page
    so you can view me everytime
    you pass by the kitchen table...
    your desk...
    the bed you lay me down on
    because you are the headline of my show
    and everybody knows
    the super star can only have co-stars
    so to be first on your page
    is more than enough for me.
    -7
     
  6. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    I'm gone put you on the first page, so everyone can keep up with the depths of your mental.

    Lister,

    Thank you for being "dug" ya dig?


    $$RICH$$,

    While ya watching from up there keep things cool cause I may need to take flight one day.


    Wildflower7,

    My very first "poet in crime." I see that your pen is warming up (but, then again did it ever cool off?) We gon' have to set it off in here. Thanks for the hit. You still have that white dress from the fire escape?
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB.....

    ....this was interesting... & in an effort to keep
    YOU on the front page... imma hit it... (no pun intended) :lol:

    OneLuv...
    SunShyne~
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    white dress...

    didn't you rip and tear it off the last time...?
    -7
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are somethin' else blak. When I'm 'hungry' for verse, you always give me that extra 'mouthful'. *Chillin' in this aftermath* :D
     
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