Black Poetry : PUTTING THINGS TOGETHER!

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  1. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK, I PUT THIS POEM TOGETHER BASED ON THE TITLES ON THE FIRST PAGE OF DESTEE'S "GET YOUR FLOW ON." THESE ARE THE TITLES OF YOUR POEMS(as of 9:15pm central time) PUT INTO ONE. I EXCLUDED MINE (WHERE'S YO EMERGENCY) ....WHEW. DON'T KNOW WHAT I GOT MYSELF INTO, BUT HERE IT IS.


    I took "2 steps Back" to "Drop the real."
    "I'm giving this page a transfusion of my thoughts" so you can really feel.
    The "Saturday Rain" made me "think twice" about "the ReEvolution of me."
    I closed my eyes and felt "Joy,Pure Bliss" but for some reason it was so "Bittersweet>"
    My "defiance" told me that "Honest Clings" to NO ONE.
    "Just Because" "Of You," I'm "Trying my best" not to live life numb.
    I wrote "A letter to Poetry," telling her there's "a lot more to come."
    I had to let her know this is "spiritual warfare."
    This mission of mine isn't about "Artistic Purpose," this is about my spirit, so I have to prove I care.
    Cause I can see God in the "one legged man" "down by da riverside."
    He smiled a chipped tooth smile and made my heart cry.
    "I wanna be" in the days "when we used to break dance."
    I wish I lived in the days of Afro's and all the "I'm Black & Proud" chants with out the question mark.
    We're back to standing at start.
    I need to "borrow" a cup of your revolution.
    Cause I feel this game we're coming close to losin'.
    I feel "betrayed" because we're not fighting hard enough.
    We're "throwing game" plans out the window.
    Sending warnings on the "broken arrow."
    We no longer are going to live our lives "untitled."
    "Untitle life" and know this will be "Defiance revised."
    Trust in him, he'll lead us away from this pain and disarray.
    "He is" your light, your soul and the "fragrance" of your being.
    I'll do more than "Stay Black and Die," no need to worry about that.
    Cause "DAG" this "Poetry is like eating cake."
    It may taste good, but don't let it determine your fate.
    This may be a "short keystyle" for some, but I need you all to look deeper into my words.
    "May hope" "always have" "a love poem."
    It's not my Heat...now it's yours."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte scribe of poetic mix title twist
    u go gurl !!!!!
     
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    this was tight...
     
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    Very Nice Royal_T.. You pinned a nice piece here. How creative and well posed. I like it. :D ... At this :bomb:
     
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    [email protected] gurl...
    that took some talent to do...
    my goodness...
    <in awe>
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH..Thank you rich. I'm glad you liked.

    mzblkangel...Thank sistah. Much appreciated coming from you.

    HODEE...Really. You smiled at it. That's love.

    KHASM...I'm searching. I'm just looking around at other folks work and loving it ...so I figured I could just put all the beautiful works together somehow. I won't tell you how long it took me. LOL
     
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    PUTTING IT TOGETHER PART 2 (112103 @ 5:47 PM CST)

    Our "Creative Differences" is our "Common Place."
    So sit back and relax, "I got this song."
    "Don't piss on the weak ones!!!"
    Because a "brand new day" is always gauranteed to come.
    "Xpectin' love when it's no love you gave"
    You "Krazy 1" you trying to "To Breed a Slave?"
    A love slave? I want you to "heed the call."
    Kiss me right or don't kiss me at all.
    I'm "dreamin' of a lover" that can handle "the feast."
    "No more mind games" we're about to bring our tensions to ease.
    "Your touch" brings me to "My Hiatus."
    His "Love is!" "Poetic Foreplay" and I love every moment of it.

    Our dialouge was simple but a bit explicit.
    Him: "when you're ready to moan...phone me."
    Her: "Are you ready for me?" It can get a bit heavy.
    Him: Girl, we'll have "Metaphysical Moments," I'll show you a "view of self." You won't be the same, you'll have to file a "Missing Persons" report on yourself.
    Her: Cocky huh? You're gonna make me "An Orphan in my family?" Think about it, "Who really has the power?"
    Him: We'll have a "night chorus." I'll have you singing "untiltled" thru "untitled #9" D'Angelo style. I'll show you a "LUV TITANIC" cause I'll have you floatin' for awhile.
    Her: "Oh you will..."
    Him: Yes, "reach out" cause I need to feel "The beauty of a woman."
    "Her voice speaks out": Together we can be "The flower and the son" and I'll make sure you say "yes yes baby" until you cu.....
    Him: You embody "An Angel's Love" sent from above girl.
    Her: You're my "Chocolate swirl...you rocked my world."

    Our love call had to end but we have a strong "Distant Frequency."
    No matter how good it felt, It's "not about the peace, its about the pain."
    My heart aches and "Fate is my role" and I am in control of what I will gain from this man.
    I'm gonna make him my biggest fan.

    This is "My ode to Philly" cause I had no other way to fit it in
    And "HAPPY BIRTHDAY RANDEE" you're the man. :)



    This one was a lot harder than the first ....geez....took me an hour + ....LOL ...I tried. ROY :spinn: <----that's the crazy spin. That's how I feel for getting myself into this one......LMAO
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The cast

    The first joint I didn't write the names...

    The cast for number 2:
    danakedpoetess,redlady,vivaciousvixen,Khasm13,Azula,Mzblkangel,libertylaida,chaos,BaduX,Moham,mslucioiusb,Olakuoto,AfroBoricuaRoni,Rich,Noiresista,MaddRapper,1poetsought,caramelpython,Cube33,Shylorien,illwillthakid,The_story.
     
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    All I can say is Talented with a capital T. Did this take you long to write, or did it just roll off of your pen?
     
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    awwwwwwwwwwe WOW!!!!
    dis was the bomb
    u did it again wooooooweeeeeeeeeee!
     
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