Black Poetry : Puttin' My Mack Down

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  1. HighEmme

    HighEmme Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw him
    a view in my perrifial
    caught him
    as soon as he came through the door
    I looked at him
    then I looked away
    trying to ignore
    his cute *** smile
    and his thugged out style
    **** it's been a while
    since I saw a man
    that made me stare
    so hard
    that I know he can feel it
    and I don't even care
    if he can feel me lookin'
    cause I got plans to book him
    I want him on my team
    even if it means
    me approaching him...
    "Excuse me boo,
    my intentions aren't to be rude
    but I had to come talk to you.
    I know that you hear it all the time
    but I have to tell you again
    sweetie, you are so fine
    maybe we can get up some time
    so I can see what's up with you
    and just see how you do
    and how you get down
    I come here a lot
    but I've never never seen you around
    I'm glad that all that changed
    naw, I'm not spittin' game
    that's not in my nature
    just take my number down
    and promise to call me later."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    get up on it !
    laying ya mack momma down.
     
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    re: hi <-----

    good-evening HighEmme,


    nice of you to take the time to post this poem...


    Note: one can see that you have your own style... :D


    do post again soon...


    have a bless day...


    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
  4. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    me too...

    i'm liking this... us ladies gotta put our mack down too. much props for putting it out there.
    and that is so true... :smokin:
     
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