Black Poetry : Put the Happy in my Valentine (inspired by Baller)

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  1. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My idea to write this piece came from Baller's piece "She Had No Man." Thanks for inspiration Baller.



    ****, here it comes again
    Anotha Valentine’s Day
    Without a Man
    I go through this year after year
    I mean where’s my man?
    Why I ain’t got no chocolates
    and flowers and shcitt like that?

    Don’t I deserve to be happy?
    It is called “Happy” Valentine, right?
    So where’s my happy? Where’s my man?

    Why can’t you wine and dine me
    on this special occasion. Am
    I not a woman? Am I not good enough
    to be your woman?
    What’s wrong with me? Why it seem
    like you running? Hiding? Avoiding me? Where you at, man?

    C’mon and put the happy in my Valentine’s Day.

    Schitt, you ain’t even gotta spend no money.
    Just spend some time with me on this day.
    I’m tired of being alone on this day.
    I’m tired of being alone on this day.
    I say I’m tired of being alone on this day, especially.

    C’mon and put the Happy in my Valentine.
     
  2. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I heard that sis' and I know it well. nice scribe


    am
     
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    Loving this flow.........When you get back to the states...meet me in the Lighthouse for your Valentine....
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful

    flow girl......



    One
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kim...

    Patience is the essence of virtue... :wink:

    Nice piece Queen!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    kim oh my gurl u made da heart beat fast ....loved it
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She can be her own valentine...send herself some roses at the job and erythang.
     
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    Girl I hear you! Valentine's Day often causes loneliness to be amplified. Real love is worth waiting for, even when it seems it is not coming fast enough or not at all. Show yourself some love with a bottle of good wine, a bubble bath, some chocolate, and some flowers, cuz the best love after God's love is loving self!
     
  9. poeticdelight

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    Girl!

    you took it there

    keep writing

    diggin' this :toast:

    pd
     
  10. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my brothas and sistas for the advice and love. it's all well taken in. much love

    Kim
     
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