Black Poetry : ...put that on everything.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by elayne., Sep 26, 2002.

  1. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    at times like these…
    i wish my heart had wings
    so i could fly to you…
    …to comfort&console you
    while you… work thru
    the fallacy created by her
    what you don’t know…
    can’t possib-ly hurt you

    mentality…
    i wish my words had wings
    & i Would fly to you…
    …& lie beside you
    to hold the grief for you
    …allowing you to
    once again…
    dream in perfect peace

    so… myking… no worries
    …the sun will come out again.

    …maybe not tomorrow
    but just like you believe in
    you&me… rest assured…
    that soon… you Will be
    basking in the resplendent rays
    of brighter days…
    …listening to the soothing
    sounds of Coltrane &
    gent-ly falling rain… with no
    traces of summer’s sorrow
    chasing yesterday’s pain across
    your beautifulblack brow

    maybe not tomorrow…
    but certain-ly… before long
    we’ll be loving
    complete-ly uninterrupted
    by the sad songs of
    loves gone wrong
    …the pain&hurt will dissipate
    & be replaced by
    soothing yet melancholy
    musings of the great-ness
    …never to be born
    (because it wasn’t time)

    & i promise…
    you’ll be able to smile

    …i’d put that on everything.



    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this comforted me ya know i love da depth and how
    masterful it is flow on sistah i'm lovin what ya doing !
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what can i say that i haven't said already?

    tyte as ultra, i mean ..usual :wink:

    we'll kinect
     
  4. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    jp. let's see... you could say somethin' like...
    *ahem* "elayne you are the best **** love poet
    i've ever read. you poems make me want to write
    you checks &..." :lol: i don't think you've said any
    of that before!! (lol) thank you for the love, dahlin'.
    you are appreciated... much!! :heart:
    sherrie. thank you! you're pretty beauti-Ful
    your **** self!! :D
    rich. thank you for loving what i do! you are
    always saying the sweetest thangz!! :)

    itsallLove, chirens!
     
  5. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh Huh...

    Shower stay droppin that SupaFantastic Love ****... You are constant.

    Reas
     
  6. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reas. well... consistancy is very important to
    me... personal-ly! :lol: serious-ly tho'... i appreciate
    you makin' the time dahlin'!! :D

    itsallLove, chile! (4Life)

    elayne.
     
  7. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this cant be!!!!!

    i dont think i have ever made the first page of an original
    piece by elayne!!!!!!!!!!!

    great post like always

    i'm gonna try to get something together to post in here
     
  8. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    lp. there you go again... makin' my heart
    smile! :D i soooo appreciate you always finding
    time to share a kind word of praise for my work.
    now... i'm still waiting on that post! don't think i
    forgot!! :)

    itsallLove, chile!
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you got the gift

    and i'm glad you usin it...




    One
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tight-fully beautiful.

    Deep title...I's dig it!

    Coco :heart:
     
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