Black Poetry : Put It Down

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Feb 6, 2002.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PUT IT DOWN

    Cats don’t fulfill our need we try to be ill and proceed
    Like a cure to cancer not sure of the answer they read
    But don’t reply I won’t cry but why? It’s their creed
    Never seen one clever team that could last forever on the scene
    Their rhymes get stale they become blind and fail
    Design won’t prevail this kind of stuff get you in jail
    Oops there goes the green flows no longer mean
    Success grows stronger in a dream it’s like a steel beam
    Feel the steam make you squeal in your dream
    Could have success in music best not to abuse it
    You can use it to your advantage to quell damage don’t refuse it
    Songwriters become strong fighters and dome igniters
    Supply and demand makes you try to stand and not roam with biters
    Often this could soften your heart in places like Wal-Mart
    It’s all spark like firecrackers then you desire backers
    On computers you hire hackers this require attackers
    Inform cats and storm stats while in uniform with bats
    Use liquid soap on kids wit dope try to clean up the brats
    They grimly puff it and slimly stuff it wit the itch of being
    Rich like Jimmy Buffet if the cop sees it they hand cuff it
    Spend jail in the bucket, **** it, yo duck it
    Put it out find peace with the blind police kind of **** don’t cease
    The lock down increase that happy smoke is a nasty joke like the beast

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo Madd
    Couln't agree with you more, dad

    Gotta keep it comin
    Represent to fullest

    Have cats looking dumb
    When they look what we've done

    Flex da style
    Comin proper
    Still achievin success

    Doin the best
    We can

    To make mom and dad
    Proud

    Comin back to our
    Peeps
    And knowledge
    We speak

    Sending letters
    And post cards

    From all across the world

    With dreams we possess
    Desire and destiny

    Predestined
    Can't escape reality

    So keep on doin ya thing
    No matter what people say

    Keep on makin it better
    Don't doubt it
    Just let it come together.

    Lovely piece fa realz.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    quiet storm as i sit back and enjoy da flows
    Madd break it on down bru....
     
  4. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you hit the next level with this one here!!
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD...

    What about that contract bro???

    What's the deally man????

    Your flow is straight banging!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Desert Storm, $$RICH$$, IP Logged AND GQ HEY YALL CAME THROUGH THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS PIECE FOR REAL YO
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    hahaha

    tyte flow

    got one question though :D

    How did you manage to **** censor one
    cuss word but then spell this out S-H-I-T

    :lol:

    :x: haHA
     
  8. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta Come Back

    Can't believe it
    Now that I can percieve it

    It's love
    How I write the questions to my mind

    It's love
    When I can sing
    And thrill shrieks
    As when I first began

    Y'all just don't understand
    Music is my bestfriend

    My spirit is talking when it's weak
    I feel the unique energy

    When I scribe to you

    In song or in spoken words

    It's love the way
    Music reminds me of you

    How can I describe
    Nice to feel this way

    keep on scribin the way you know how
    Don't ever change

    I feel this way because I love to sing
    I feel this way because I see how it's changing me

    So I'll let it take over because
    I can't get enough

    Need it in the morning
    When I'm waking up

    I need a lullaby
    Before I go to sleep

    Don't mean to brag
    This is what music does to me

    And It's love
    Just like Jill Scott
    Sings

    Now I'm finished
    Recite chorus
    And listen to the story

    Nothing else makes me feel better
    Even when it's stormy weather

    I'm finished ...

    Desert Storm
     
  9. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poeticdelight AND Desert Storm THANKS FOR RESPONDING TO THIS AND DESERT STORM YOU CONTINUE TO DROP ENERY
     
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