Black Poetry : pushing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hisili, Nov 9, 2004.

  1. hisili

    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For five years I've felt ur pain
    kept my pain locked inside
    givin u my all to wash away ur pain

    but u start pushin
    pushin me away
    the man who told u how beautiful u r
    the man who held u close
    for ur tears, ur kisses, ur smile
    the man who knew ur darkest secrets
    the man who saw no other woman b4 u
    the boy YOU turned into a man.

    but u
    u just kept pushin
    ur father called u names
    but me u pushed
    ur mother dismissed u
    but me u pushed
    ur bestfriend resented u
    but me YOU pushed

    the only man who truly cares
    the only man who truly loves
    the only man who truly knew
    who u were and how u felt

    but u
    u pushed me away
    I can c in ur eyes thas not wat u wanted
    but u pushed longer than I could hold
    Im ashamed to say i gave up
    but u just kept pushin.... kept pushin....
     
  2. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dont give up.......
    sometimes all u can do is push away those who kno u best b/c it makes u feel like u dont kno urself... but when the time comes and that person aint there... thats who u long for.. she will rrealize it when ur gone
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep down she feel u and every push
    she really grasping more from past pain
    keep the drive and love for she will see
    through your eyez
    tyte heart felt drop here wow !!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anything worth having is worth fighting for, as long as both parties involved truly want it badly enough. Emotively posed, I feel ya poet.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Push on.....................
    GREAT PIECE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    pushing it back up
    this flow was awesome
     
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