Black Poetry : pushin me away

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, May 2, 2003.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you make an art form out of pushin me away
    shutting me out
    hearing prison doors slam
    makin me feel less than i am
    from my man
    i feel as though i am alone
    and you're right there
    with a remote in your hand
    like in new jack city *bleep*
    you want me to disappear
    i say how was your day...you say it sucked
    i say my day was rough too...
    you say i don't want to hear your complaints
    i say i'm not complaining, just trying to make conversation
    how about a kiss hello
    you roll your eyes
    tell me kissin' is corny and...walk away
    climb up on the bed...remote in your hand *bleep*
    new jack city...it's playoff season
    make me disappear again
    i could be doin' that uniqua dance in
    red lace panties and push up bra
    and you'd zap me anyway with a whateva *bleep*
    you'd tell me i was being narcissistic
    instead of being sexy for you
    i fill my hours doing wifey type things
    taking care of our children
    keeping the home clean
    wearing my wifey type diamond rings
    and they are such ********, a symbol of possession
    and that's about it
    we also buy collars for our dogs
    at the end of the day i ask for your love
    a few minutes of communication
    anything to make me feel alive
    make me feel safe and whole
    make me feel like we're a part of each other
    but instead all i get is
    *bleep* from your remote
    i've never met a man so cold
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Red these the one we run into
    when it's dark turn da light on

    lovin dis flow here
     
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    stay strong Queen. It has to get better.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    redlady

    Some people don't miss a good thing until it's gone...

    Or some people don't miss the water until the well runs dry...

    Maybe, some people are just not worth your time.

    I can feel your passion...your hurt...your pain.

    :grouphug:


    Open Mic/Poetry
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum, that was a sad poem, but good... communication is the key...keep ya head up.........much love.......... :)
     
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    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks...sometimes i have my moments...but tomorrow is always a betta day.
     
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