Black Poetry : Pursuit They Still Chasing

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  1. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    Dem cars still rolling by,
    peeping you out,
    for the payday,
    in the rain sleet snow,
    you wild as ever stealing,
    robbing meek and cutie,
    the stores hold conversations,
    they pull up and people scatter,
    like roaches endangered,
    she phat ready pumping gas,
    cars bumping loud phantoms ghost,
    smoked out plus the kids staring,
    dogs looking both ways smarter,
    before entering the crossing roads of ways,
    headlights brighter staying in my lane,
    in my rearview mirror they jumping,
    head nodding bass shaking,
    up ahead a line of ants needing food,
    what's up moon shining waiting on sun,
    our nights are days,
    when conception made,
    in between nappy and smooth buns,
    the feeling is real,
    laid back slop up for real,
    the slurp is too ill,
    her grab is sealed tightly,
    the excitement is climax,
    my man is about to do two weeks behind steel,
    but we still doing life regardless,
    with my for us by us tied down double knots,
    afro padded fluffy trimmed mustache clever,
    short tut goatee blacker and curly,
    eyes of suspicion let the window down,
    pass the chiller and let's get heated,
    blue lights fender bender with no lights on,
    swerving to the right purposely,
    neck and neck eyeing us,
    destiny and fate side by side,
    the anger of intensity grinding teeth,
    my ecstasy of unreasoning feeling is retaliation,
    revelation of getback memories spinning back to back,
    shellshocked breathless spiritless i'm coming out bomb,
    dead on arrival explosion won is from my bloodline sacrificed owed,
    for the future as now i got you inside point hollow beat heart stopped,
    echoing my last breath out my grand canyon crackling popping,
    they still chasing....

    (Diary of a Black Man: Raw Remnants Head On) Copyright 2014
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice i changed a little into HIP HOP

    the feeling thrill and bold
    as dem cars still roll
    her facts nice and savage
    but can't sacrifice my marriage
    for a sweet kiss and a complete twist
    of my morals her lips are heat brisk
    like stoves of fire a robe is my desire
    a globe of entire honeys but will require
    some persuasive love talk wow my car tire
    inflated don't need air to proceed in this affair
    I stay to play on payday hormones start to flare
    but it ain't fitting to be gitting sex and hitting
    the complex skins on this cutie with the booty
    drunk rum now the funk come front some my duty
    is get a date and that wet cake and the sweat takes
    it toll this makes my goal difficult
     
  3. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    I don't really like hip hop no more you know? It use to be about mathematics and science as an art but times changed it or should i say the people. So i'm on spirituality music (refining and redesigning my lyrics as we speak)...cause hip hop is mostly about how much game you got or skill of perception right? Well i'm bringing out of myself me which is perception itself and with discernment and discrimination. Just a glimpse of what i'm doing or working with...the human body (encyclopedias though i specialize in the brain and nervous system) and spiritual body then when the money starts to flow in i'm giving back with a plan already intact. See you cut the politicians out completely when you stay true to yourself by knowing thyself. I'm on a minor scale with this and know the spots in Europe, Asia, and America...I haven't really dealt with Latin America and Africa though Africa is within all so going over really don't even matter cause you are muthaland when you walking. I got my own mind and i have accepted to be truthful from within. I can't do hip hop no more though it is still appreciated for what it is worth. I just got too much on mind to be not me plus most of my lessons come from the rose and lotus themselves. I'm not against any hip hop, i just got another perception to add to the whole thought process without politics. Keep hip hop going for what it's worth cause i can't stop it but i can start my own spiritual music. Peace.
     
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    this is one of them i posted in this forum under the "Which Season Is it Pisces? The School+Teacher." Thread but i'm revising and adding to it as a composition so the flow continues though in here i use Chess and their numbers of each piece and of course the Spine. The flow is suppose to be the neuron activity traveling at an unknown speed hit them head-on with of course the sounds moving them upright. I'm working with trigonometry to get a better understanding of "sound relation" to the human body and spiritual consciousness. I'm not a mad scientist or whatever i just be really into this so check it out below:

    eye come out planned and freestyle,
    on three disc times 33 erecting righteousness upright,
    moving as one unit of people known as black love,
    eye come out planned and freestyle,
    on three disc times 33 erecting righteousness upright,
    moving as one unit of people known as black love....

    Eye got the Book of Nu Queens and Kings,
    from the underworld to the higherworld,
    being balanced is what eye sea,
    above so below and back up,
    enable to see through the egos,
    grasping our hearts combined,
    sown much love loving blaq dendera circle,
    coming out is life overdue,
    let my voice travel farther,
    add sound and let me unprogram minds of the masses,
    cause about face is the effect,
    forward is the check,
    16 times out of respect and loyalty,
    how many ways can we reposition,
    out of preposition's postposition,
    head on dropping depositions,
    predisposition positioned envisioning,
    fusion under the influence of consistency,
    the rivers you them flowing reflections,
    sea me deeper totally high within empathy,
    aspiring nu consciousness marching as glory cleverly.

    eye come out planned and freestyle,
    on three disc times 33 erecting righteousness upright,
    moving as one unit of people known as black love,
    eye come out planned and freestyle,
    on three disc times 33 erecting righteousness upright,
    moving as one unit of people known as black love.
     
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    I like your style thanks for sharing a piece of you...Angel
     
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