Black Poetry : Purple Passion...by Joyce & J'hiah

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was so tired and glad to be home.
    As I entered our little castle,
    I saw purple petals on the floor;
    Leading a trail to the bathroom.

    I opened the door and there he stood,
    In the image that God created.
    He was so masculine, yet so gentle,
    Under the flame of a deep purple candle.

    After all these years,
    He still colors my passion...purple.
    As we stepped into the garden tub,
    He stroked my palm and whispered...
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Two of my Favs!!!

    Yall left me hangin at the end?!? but I dig that cuz my mental took it from there and kept flowin...

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    j'hiah has to respond next :lol:

    i just thought i should point that out

    nice flow JOYCE :)

    pd
     
  4. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reason: That's what I had to do myself :D Thanks for the read and do keep peepin and commentin' thru out.

    PD: Thanks for the read sis. Just waitin' on your sweetie now.:D
     
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    the J&J connection. i'm liking the combo of you.

    let the river flow.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love when you two flow like this.
    I can't wait :jumping: to see where it goes.

    I'm diggin' the start Joyce


    Scribeaboutit! It helps
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    great work poets

    love is a wonderful thing
    and romance too

    loving the combo

    DSS
     
  8. j'hiah

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    yes i saw her royal radiance
    just before her divine entrance
    reflecting the color of wisdom virtue and dark beauty...
    i took her by the hand, kissed her temple as she closed her eyes

    "do nothing queen, be still"
    undressing her into a world far away, beholding the divine anatomy
    she was my purple city on a hill
    full of royalty and majesty

    i undressed myself to enter with her into forever's baptismal
    i did stroke her palm
    and whispered the words that even the angels could not hear

     
  9. Bishop

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    yall just write so pretty together!!! This was tight!!!
     
  10. poeticdelight

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    alright now

    out......

    pd ;)
     
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