Black Poetry : Purple Mountains

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Purple mountains
    Hazy dayz……
    Dayum...... :crying:
    Screams in your sleep
    Like a fiery night mare
    As the flower dies
    A thought flyz
    Blowing through the wind
    Smoke covered dream
    Releasing the madness
    Holding on to a dream
    That cant be reach…..
    Once its there it fades
    Cant touch…out of reach
    Disappears..
    Like it was never there
    With in the haze of
    The thought
    And just go away
    Purple mountains
    Pink flowers
    And green grass
    Sky full of blue..but
    The dream just got harder
    Whats the purpose
    Free cryin the pain
    Of the release and
    you just drown
    Once more a cycle that never
    Stops…….
    Can feel
    Cant see…
    Spinning blindly
    Upon the cloud
    Purple mountains…..
    The sadness in the soul
    Begins…..to boils
    burns so deep
    the pain eats away….
    Purple mountains
    As the soul dies
    And the heart
    dries out

    2004​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have flowed so that the reader can almost see the ache in the mist of it all. Painfully well written.
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Awe man! mzblkangel
    you just killed my
    love for purple.
    Surely the soul
    is vibriant and also
    burns dimly at times
    But sweet passionate angel
    the soul never dies.
    Just stand real tall
    Spread your arms to the wind
    Take in a huge gasp of air
    and hold it relevantly still
    when you feel you're about to burst
    Exhale that pain within
    open your heart
    and healing begins
    If you find
    that this method don't reap
    just do it again and again
    until the spirit burns free

    What a very heartfelt piece! I'm feeling you all the way!
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is just beautiful, sister. I truly feel ya. :grouphug:
     
  5. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You express pain so beautifully!
    That's the mark of a truly gifted individual!
    I'm so in awe of you
    But you already know that....right?

    Much love2U

    twision
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    mzblkangel...

    Sweetie, you're outdoing yourself. :D

    I love this peace...on point yet filled with feelings of disappointment...hurt.

    Well expressed...deeply felt.


    :thanks: for sharing you with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    color coded blast ....
    a real blow up flow on
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    thanks for the read
    a blow it is
    glad ya likes da
    color coded blast :wink:

    Peace angel
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thanks Money for all ya support
    Peace my brother
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the showin
    the love and support that you do
    means alot
    Peace
    Angel
     
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