Black Poetry : ~~~PURIFYING RAIN~~~

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  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    late evening
    early night
    gazing out the window
    april showers
    bring may flowers
    or so i'm told
    seen rain before
    but tonight it seems new
    in my mind i stand
    BARE
    rain mixes with my tears
    to hide my distress
    soul is well watered
    when do the orchids bloom?

    Love&Respect

    ~DymesGetDaBlues
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    very nice DymePlaya2G ...

    reading this peace
    i see nothing but orchids
    wet from the rain
    wet from tears
    wet ...

    very nice

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um in my mind i stand bare. well dyme you can let that distress out on the boards, it helps me sometimes
     
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    Feelin You~

    You've got skill, Beautiful piece sis. Keep on going don't stop. Love this piece
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    poetry at it's best

    when it's short, sweet and deep...that's poetry! Props to U 4 dat...1luv
     
  6. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spring

    ~Destee~ they are now in full bloom :)

    ~UbZoRbShUn~ so true...i was lost for a minute but now that i know where my family is, i know where i am.

    ~Desert Storm~ As always the love is appreciated but i'm not a sis...im a brutha...guess u were thrown by some of my other joynts...having said that...i guess u got somethings to think about...LOL :)

    ~Twofish~ ur words are always appreciated and respected!

    Love&Respect!!!
     
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    Dymeplaya2g

    Purify...
    clear your mind through
    poetry...
    here on the boards of
    DESTEE

    It's been my safehaven
    got me...
    spiritually driven from
    all the support they've given!!!

    Much loveN'respect!
     
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    how can i describe this,
    pure, yeah.

    this was a deep and beautiful dymeplizzle..
    keep purifying

    peace.
     
  9. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All smiles

    Afridancr~ since finding u all...my mind is gradually clearing!!!

    J'hiah A.K.A J'Hizzle~ UR Love is always appreciated...fuh sheezee buhleeve me...:)

    Love&Respect!!!
     
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    Hey Dyme!!! This one is deep...Thanks for sharing.
     
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