Black Poetry : Purgatory pt. 2

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  1. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Warfare

    The trap set in motion
    Feeling forsaken
    My mind chaotic
    Emotionally drained
    Spiritual anorexia
    Demons of the past coming to haunt me
    My soul a wreak
    Ravaged by inner turmoil
    My psyche in an uproar
    God calling me back
    Resentful for the suffering
    My heart inflamed with pain
    My soul won't be still
    Chastised for my sins
    My mind a playground for wretchedness
    Fixated on “An eye for an eye”
    Unable to do warfare
    Lacerations made to my heart
    Afflicted and staggering
    In distress
    Lack of will power
    Lasciviousness replacing righteousness
    Inside about to erupt
    Overtaken by anguish
    My spirit wailing
    I am enraged
    Angry
    Feeling I am being punished
    Emotional hell
    Riots all around
    Compromising my character
    Helpless to the attacks
    Powerless in battle
    Naked with no armour
    My spirit is losing
    The flesh is overpowering
    Taking over
    My spirit is wounded
    It is broken
     
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    it may be broken
    but listen

    you have in friend in me
    i will cry with thee

    dont carry the burden any longer
    sista you must maintain to be stronger

    but if you need help, help isnt far away
    let your sista come to save the day

    let her off some inspiration
    to tell ya quard away from temptation

    as the devil seeks to devour
    upon the hour

    with love from friends
    true friendship will never end

    purgatory part 2 will soon be heaven
    please dont xpect for luck to be rolled on a 7 or eleven

    sista i offer my hand
    remember god's command

    throw your burdens upon my shoulder and i will lighten your load!!!!!!!

    nice write sista filled with deep emotion that was truly felt.
    hit a sista up!!!!!!!!!!
    :kiss1:
     
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    My burden is heavy
    My spirit is weak
    Forgetten his voice
    Feel I cannot come back
    I have drifted to far away
    My mind is rebellious
    My heart won't stop breaking
    Deserted!!!
    Everday my soul weeps
    Yes this burden is heavy
    Weary
    I am so very waery
    How can I go on
    Alone......
    Alone in self affliction
    Can't discern friend from foe
    Suspicious
    Father are you there
    I cannot feel you
    Father do you care
    I am still hurting
    Father can you hear me
    Hear my weeping soul.
     
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    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    From start to finish, this piece screams out wit so much emotions...Jes keep writing the realness, Soblessed...

    Drizz
     
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    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU NEVAR AND DIZZ:kiss1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this reach out surely one's cry will be heard ...wow ! soblessed
     
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    lord i ask in the name of jesus to remove the demons
    i ask that you remove one of the plotters name scheming

    i want you to remove all the hate that lies around
    help her to embrace the love that is found

    i ask lord for light to shine through
    can you send her a message to tell her i love you

    let my sista never feel the crack of the devil's whip
    help her to fight satan smack him across the lip

    she tired of the lies
    she tired of the disquise
    she tired of the demise

    lord all she wants is the chance to make it
    she dont want hope and prosperity to split

    but i say help her to put on the armor of God
    dont let the devil to nod

    and mock our father
    i tell ya SoBlessed the devil Satan wont get farther

    because our father will come say the day
    I tell ya from the bottem of my heart I will pray
    for him to take your heavy burden away

    so that my sister can rize from the ashes of


    Purgatory Part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :hearts4:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Gurl I love this poem, part1 and 2
    Wonderful piece!:kiss1:
     
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    "Spiritual anorexia"

    those are fantasic words to express so much

    You better be enjoying how great you are growing as a writer
    It is wonderful to watch

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    THANK YOU CURSED HEART
    tHANKS PATRICECQUEEEN THAT MEANS ALOT COMING FROM YOU...
     
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