Black Poetry : purgatory of hopes

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aquarian measurements
    of feelings never sent
    to completion
    holding on to memories
    never meant for dreaming
    leaving you in a purgatory full of hopes
    waiting for acheiving
    helping capitalize
    the quest for LOVE
    and the definition of LEAVING
    not knowing what's real
    or what's reality is dreaming
    in a sanctury that only
    the ONE can see
    a place only the one could be
    searching heart closed
    for the one to do
    riding manic waves of possibility
    swimmin on what faith should do
    leaves u stuck on what man will do
    n between
    mind and imagination
    progess and stagnation
    not knowing whats real
    or really an illusion.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this last part

    very very profound

    great work poet
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't just wait on what man will do, cause often times, you'll be waiting. Well written scribe poetess, great to read you again.
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks much for such positive words
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    often when in a maze one will see through the technics of it all
    u had my mind going on this one awesome write sis ...
     
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    wow very impressive work you have!
     
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