Black Haiku : Pure simplicity.... a string haiku

divine_1

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Peace yall, i'm not sure if there's a such thing as a string haiku. iIf it's not, i just made it so. In my opinion,there is so much left unsaid by some haiku's that they have to be stringed together. Here's one.

"Pure Siplicity"

sitting here counting
syllables on my
fingers like it's math

not understanding
the simplicity in u
the beauty either

that was years ago
now i understand that u
are not that complex

and i accept u
for the beauty that u are
pure simplicity
 
I don't know about anyone else but this haiku poem strung me as being so profoundly true, being that I count them thangs on my fingers often. And yes, haikus can be stringed. I love doing that from time to time like I did here with The Budding

I really enjoyed this haiku. I hope you continue to develop the gift of simplicity in your own divine way.
 

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