Khasm13 : pure prose #1

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    untainted pictures painted impossibly elaborated
    and collaborated deep in the veins while sweeping lanes like the inebriated
    it's a hard job being debated as the most hated...cause it's so pure
    the uncutable lure that leads to the insatiable cure
    the generational f├╝hrer that coincides with the universal tides
    engulfing your insides while adding sheen to multiple hides
    cleansing culpable lives regardless of the sins seal size
    look with zeal into the pens real eyes and tell me what u see
    possibly an allegory growing and flowing potently
    while the daft drown hopelessly in deep open seas
    untouched words linger then leap in the breeze and spread like a sneeze
    pollinating while tolerating the green on the bottom of the bees
    please prepare to ice ur knees cause the day is here to be seized...
    like pure dope keys shipped from overseas...
    boxed in island trees....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this some ill ish bruh , you always come correct ......tyte !
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    always

    always a pleasure
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow, love poetry that makes me think. This :welldone: as usual
     
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