Black Poetry : PURE BLISS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Walking by the ocean path
    on this perfect blissful night
    moon glaze cross the water
    the waves crashing mightily
    love scample through
    my heart open like the
    river dance

    At the end of the long plank
    on the dock a beautiful soul
    before me her glisting smile
    comfort my heart like an
    radiant of glo

    In the hour of bliss
    my eyes beam down
    into a rapture of love
    face to face we trace
    our affection
    hand n' hand
    perfectional maze born
    the great sea wobble
    twist and turn
    love of compassion yearn
    burning feelings in our eyes
    i then brgin to mesmerize
    her wit the charm of love
    hypnotize in my stream
    of fire a desire to destin
    the essence of her linger

    bliss motions tugz
    is it reality of sweetness
    or a dream of passion
    sharing such happiness
    as i put her closer in
    my mental memory
    the shore of blissin love
    waves again and again
    of a beauty deep within

    she must be my Queen !
    of pure bliss ........ :love:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so
    beautiful it flow
    with ease
    wit a sweet
    linger behind it
    she be the one
    cuz she got
    you singing...
    sing on......
    very lovely flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O'yes Angel
    from the maze of love
    she must be thy Queen
    untouched by time
    but together we shine
    like the love of new
    thank u sistah Queen for the love
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your welcome
    lovin this vibe...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it was the sweet soft side running
    and love mix under da bliss of heart
    thankz a lot for the love here
     
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    This was so gentle and sweet...

    Waiting for you
    at the plank's end
    is that lady, that bliss,
    that compassionate friend.
    Embracing in care
    embracing in heart
    embracing in the richness
    of love, now you start
    to feel the warmth,
    the need, the fire
    of such intense affection
    and a deep desire.
    She must be your queen.
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Divine Love is Ever Blissful...continue to tell us about it - we love 2 hear!

    1luv
    2fish
     
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    Whoa! The opening stanzas just grip with their beauty. Nice job, my sweet brotha.
     
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    watz ...
    beyond every dock
    sit a love so divine
    of a beautiful Queen
    thankz sistah

    TwoFish.............
    indeed the bliss
    of her radiant beauty
    is heart catching
    thankz sistah

    Gempis............
    like when ya eyes
    open to first light
    the beauty u see
    is so sweet and
    devine
    thankz sis

    peace QUEENZ
     
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    WOW.... :jawdrop:



    You do realize there is a contentment and energy that leaps
    through your words...and a glow the resembles the embers
    beneath a "blaze"...very much like "LOVE"...

    Feeling it...
     
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