Black Poetry : Punish me, I love you.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetic Justice, Jul 6, 2003.

  1. Poetic Justice

    Poetic Justice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Punish me, I love You!

    Sweep me under your heart for i have been bad, i love you.
    Rest your rusty tongue against my loins, first to power me with your strength, second to taunt me with the knowledge of my love.
    Punish me, i love you.
    Curl my toes , salivate my sweet person of hiding to exasperating horizons, punish me, i love you.
    Enjoy my agony, rush me to my knees, cling to my fevered skin, bait me with your eyes made just for the devil, punish me, i love you.
    Take me away to that special place, where all us women await.
    Await the man who can make everthing silly and simple.
    Punish me, i love you.
    Reach inside and grab what you own, cradle it beneath your strong fingers, hold it against the sun, let the blood of my heart seep through your fingers.
    Punish me my love , whip my mind to swim in your everlasting refuge.
    Revelate me, hold me, tell me how you want to be.
    Punish me, I love you
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Shawn'sWife

    Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy, I remember you. How are you? HAPPY NEW YEARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR :D

    This piece of yours tells the tale of a woman who is either submissive and is a glutton for punishment and believes that it is love...OR a woman who has succumb AND has accepted this kind of horrific treatment from a man whom she loves so dearly. Interesting poem.

    :thanks: for sharing your thoughts with the Fam.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey welcome back and this was beautifully pose'd
    just punish me cuz the love is strong flow on !
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    where are you girl its been a minute since i seen ya roun here ya know
    in 2005 destee.com would LOVE to have ya poetic flava back ablaze :)
     
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    Love can hurt sometimes, but if it hurts most of the time, is it still love? Thoughts to ponder, flow on scribe.
     
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