Quiet Poetry Lounge : PUNCHLINE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Mar 7, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I spring like a chicken
    dropping lyrics dat's kickin
    stronger then superman
    hotter like bro man
    masking love ones understand
    but blast like mac 10
    flip and bend even mend
    my song is untouched
    yet ya mind linger to clutch
    on the lines i punch and crunch
    my foil big and bold as i stroll
    mold and cascade deep from
    my lyrical sweep of poetic treat
    I'm one of a kind
    spit like morning shine
    no matter how many dimes dropped
    can't rock my spot dat's hot
    so lay back learn da rule
    get some tools to use before
    da invite to the light and da mic
    where it's my delight
    I love to bounce da maze
    sending many in blaze as i fade'em
    bake'em and shake'em up
    like da pony buck this no pot luck
    what u struck is GOLD
    on da punchline............................
    :deal:

    Da $R
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alrighty now keep droppin like its hot. flo on rich.:love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz sis for the love and visit ya support is warmth to my soul
     
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    Gon-on now Rich... you BAD!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thank u sista sonnee...i'm just trying to open the gates to light
     
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    oooh-weee, dattay, you got it goin on. :) I like this flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz sis , i was trying something out and punchline flowed
     
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