Black Poetry : Punani Cased

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jul 29, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scandalous
    Velvety
    Crushed ~
    At best

    Lovely
    Ugly
    Bliss
    Again

    Revelry
    Manly
    Sexy
    Friend

    Salient
    Mucosal
    Oodles
    Of them

    Hairy
    Shaved
    Human
    Race

    Stately
    Naked
    Bodies
    Make

    Strange
    Bedfellow
    Lover
    Mate

    Finer
    Vagina
    Punani
    Cased


    Darryl Abdu Omari :smokin:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet...
    your mind and craft
    are in a class all by
    themselves...
    Like the way you worked this...
    you're too much...

    Great Read!
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I also got a kick out of reading this, it was quite different and original and I like that kind of writting. thanks for sharing this with us.
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    definitely
    cased
    inspected
    reported.

    you got me with this one...enjoyed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    See now i love the creativity u pose
    this was a awesome drop poet flow on..
     
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    Creativity is your forte, I liked the way you came with this.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    creativity
    creativity
    creativity
    your flows always have so much of it, love your style
    now bring some of your style to chat :)
    www.destee.com/chat

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your generous comments are most appreciated. Thanks.
     
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    this was a tight and
    enjoyable read...

    thanks for this, it was very entertaining...
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    very clever indeed!
    Tyty piece!
    Brought a smile to my face!

    Loved it!
     
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