Black Poetry : PT2 Where the Hell Are you (2 Sides 2 Every Story)

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  1. blackchynadoll

    blackchynadoll Member MEMBER

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    Remember when you were always there
    and oh lets not forget the days you declared that you cared
    But now your'e long gone
    I told you to put the fu***** condom on
    Now I'm sitting in the house throwing up
    And now my family's looking at me like i'm an abandonded sl*t
    You don't deny this is your seed
    that you planted in me
    But somehow you've forgotten about me
    and our years of history
    I'm still a baby myself
    and your'e talking bout "keep it you know i'll help"
    I can't find you while your sperm is planted in me
    Who knows where you'll be at if I decide to drop this baby
    Walking around telling your boys you got a kid on the way as if your'e a celebrity
    Why all of a sudden are you here? Your exsistence is nothing but a memory
    Even if I do decide to keep the kid
    Guess what I'll make sure you never see it
    Stop looking at me shrugging your shoulders and shaking your head
    Because when I'm finally able to get out this bed
    I'm a make sure my cousins shoot you dead

    You know why I'm shrugging my shoulders and shaking my head
    Because I found a job, stopped hustilng, now i'm making legal bread
    Now you sucking your teeth, still not satisfied, claimed you wanted me to change
    But in your own sneaky way you loved the money I was bringing in from the drug game
    And didn't nobody call you a sl*t or whore
    Your fu***** up attitude is also why I don't come around no more
    So what if I'm telling my boys I'm a father to be
    You took all my money, disrespected my family, now you wanna take away me being proud and happy?
    Shawty are you forgetting what YOU said
    "Don't put the condom on, it feels better natural rough and soft"
    Now you got the nerve to be ticked off
    And maybe ya family's looking at you like your'e an abandonded h0e
    Cause not a day goes by that different males rotate in your house just to come and go
    I'm not gone run behind you, its not my task
    to be at your feet kissing your a**
    Talking bout if you keep the baby I won't ever "see it"
    Then I bet when you have it you'll be the first one talking bout I don't never come to see my kid
    Shawty I don't have time for you or your s**t
    Whatever you do, just don't abort my kid
    Always nagging me and stressing
    Don't you see this baby coming, is all I have, its a blessing
    If you kill my baby, then you can get your cousins to shoot me right in the head
    Because when you kill my seed you kill my heart, so when your cousins shoot me it won't matter cause i'll already be dead...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...straight wit it. :(
    u have no idea how close this hits to my fam history...
    this scribe was felt
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said..........vent let it spill out to canvas
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    also the N word is on our banned list
    we try not to use such word as we have been labled
    and called this far too long please if u will edited such
    we love ya flow and i truely love it try not to cuss as
    much for we try to keep our community clean .Thanks
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  5. blackchynadoll

    blackchynadoll Member MEMBER

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    oh okay, in the future i won't put so many curses in my poems, its anger
     
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    well understood express self is a poet's way to release

    continue ya flow i love what u do
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This as deeper than deep. It was just tyte. What can I say I'm speechless.
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i was diggin the first part, but when you flipped it I was like...WHoA! This was a bangin piece!
     
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    well said poet
    but don't let anger run your life
    if it does
    it will poisen your seed unto the third and fourth generation
    and you will see your mistakes repeated over and over again as if they were "rehersed" to perfection.
    always love
     
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    blackchynadoll Member MEMBER

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    just wanted to tell everyone who comminted thanx
     
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