Black Poetry : Psy'clone..its arrival

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  1. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I touch the pen
    the gusts of wind they form

    ban the hatches to ya' barn
    disarm -sound the alarm

    my weather cast is casting shadows
    more like "cloak and daggers"

    too climatic for the ahsmatic
    asphyxiated from words slated

    the dissident whose descent
    from "over ya' head" drops immense

    rhyme patterns so intense
    eyes flinch at full strength

    the ill-temp will make ya' clench
    like heretics to worthless relics

    like derelicts to deserts
    ya' exodus -I'm sure to merit

    fascinate with haughtiness
    as I taunt the fraudulent
    hypothesizing what is next
    should I elect this residence

    to face eviction by the storm
    so flawless
    like nature -lawless

    like tornado lanes that's never ending
    I'm content to stain terrains
    rename crews
    and defame
    these safe havens
    like hurricanes

    Psychosis of an emcee
    enacting POSTAL order
    cyclonic replication
    uprise like coastal waters

    Psy'clone in its formation
    a show stopper that hits the doppler

    brotherman
    this Griot Poet
    presents a preventative synopsis

    repercussions reverbarate
    my invigorating discussion
    infallably situating
    arrays of word -frayed when spoken

    ingenius computation of
    unknowns to a known
    miscalculate me -only once
    .......anticipate a cyclone.....

    GRIOT POETS

    From B'ham to the Gump aka Monkey Town, Dirty South, representa'....
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    the world has been warned ... i guess they betta recognize

    very nice Brotherman

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the complimentary compliment...

    Ya' know what Destee.?.. It's seems they already recognize...busy as you are running this ship, you were the only one to reply...I at least expected all the emcees to check in since I am dropping hip hop style verse but it appears that there exist a congregation whose committee has voted...feel like flooding the boards again with tons of poems but I won't ...see a whole lot of new names trying to get theirs on...so I guess I will play the back of the bus....holla.
     
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    Give 'em a minute Brotherman ... I'm sure they're gonna holla atcha.

    No need for you to play the back of the bus, aint nunna that back of the bus kinda livin' goin' on here ... feel free to flow as you'd like ... and thanks for being considerate of others, lett'n 'em get theirs too.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    IT BE THAT WAY SOMETIMES!

    NO NEED TO DISCUSS
    DON'T MAKE ME CUSS
    DON'T YOU DARE PUT
    YO *** ON THE BACK
    OF NOBODIES BUS...
    HAVE A LIL PATIENCE
    AND JUST DO YO THING
    IF YOU FEEL LIKE SUBMITTING
    ONE HUNDRED OR NOT
    WRITING ONE THING...
    I SAID IT ONCE AND I SAY IT AGAIN
    MY FRIEND!
    FIRST AMMENDMENT RULES...FREE SPEECH!
    IF THEY DON'T READ AND COMMENT...
    IT MAY BE BEYOND THEIR UNDERSTANDING
    OR THEY MAY JUST BE IN AWE
    BUT, YOU MY BROTHER ARE A SUPA NOVA

    BOUT TO BLOW UP AND BE A STAR...:bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :smokin:
     
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    Bruh'man... don't confuse silence with people tiring of your work! It simply is not so. Flow head on brother. Continue to drop it like it's hot and all that other jive. I'm lookin' for ya....

    By the way... I like this one.

    Much :heart:
     
  7. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb -loving the way you reply...and I appreciate the hip hop'tivism, no doubt...my new joints are plenty that are being introduced live in Montgomery as Griot expands...I am still chilling wit' yall ...I like response so if I don't get that constructive criticism, I won't know if I am elevating --trying to attain a universal affect, ya' know...

    MsBerry -you already know where the efforts are being placed now...we breaking ground in the gump...everyone in Griot is about to see the lighter side of performing...thanks for the "attaboy" as well...peace...holla.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    son
    feeling ya flow dun
    with the psy'clone flava and such

    dss
    do that sh*t bro man

    dss
     
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    Bru....keep it tight!!!!!
     
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