Black Poetry : psycho when it comes to you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Nov 25, 2002.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    normal things i know how to do
    but tell me
    why am i psycho when it comes to you?

    i can run my family
    make it stand on a dime
    go to work
    pick the children up on time
    clean my house
    put out fresh linens too

    but why am i psycho when it comes to you?
    i do things i wouldn’t normally do
    like dial your number 100x2
    or email you like some crazy *****
    til the **** freezes shuts down and ****

    i can grocery shop
    i can whip up a meal
    i can make love to my man
    he loves how I feel

    i can grocery shop
    find discounts on clothes
    remember important dates
    buy your mother a rose

    but no
    not when it comes to you
    i stutter and stammer and hold my breath to
    just like a child
    i have tantrums too!
    until i get some lovin’ attention from you
    what the hell is it? this thing that you do
    i’ve tried paxil and prozac and zoloft too
    none of it works
    trust me i’ve tried
    every **** tactic just about died inside

    i really don’t know what to do
    but I sure am crazy when it comes to you
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww this ...is beautifull ....no this is original......
    somthing different but very ....good.....
    i kinda wrote a poem.....a poem like that to
    all i can say is........that there is no word such as psycho....
    there is but there is also not............
    for those who can understand me...and feel me...will get it
    this was realy good........
    every emotion........sumthimes has a motion...a movement
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    crazy cute piece........ definitely know whatcha mean by this feeling....


    N2
     
  4. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWW!! thats so cute. that reminds me of me when it comes to my man. keep doin what you do.
     
  5. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the feedback, don't know why i lose myself when it comes to this individual.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dontcha just

    hate that!?! lol
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i luv it luv it luv it!!! :spinstar:
     
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