Black Poetry : Psychedelic Poetry

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  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Lick me
    Taste me
    Shoot me into your veins
    I'll share with you all your joys
    And all your pains
    Let your mind hallucinate within my imagery
    Take a psychedelic trip with my poetic LSD
    Why, even Jimi and his guitar sang of me!

    I am that lyrical craze
    Mesmerizing by the ways
    I flip a concept or turn a phrase
    Your poetic......."Purple Haze!"

    But instead of confusions
    Set forth from illusions
    I straighten the contortions.....make clear the distortions
    That befuddle your mind
    Absorbing the bits of residue left behind
    From what Life crystallized
    Transformed
    By thoughts, feelings and words...Idealized
    Onto paper
    Then, your frustrations start to taper
    As you take a trip with me
    Into my psychedelic poetry....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ya driving me wild
    inside this trail
    as i spin in da swril of maze
    as it glaze my soul from
    da psychedelic poetry

    sis u really took me there and now i'm stuck, love this
    got me in a cyberdelic mood
     
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    candeesweet going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Ya took Me on tht Maze and I kept wantin to travel for more and more never to be lost but to b found!
    Wonderfully Scripted!
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Eh!...Just sumpn light mixed with a lil trash-talkin. lol

    Thank you both again for the luv!
     
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