Black Poetry : pseudo (she' s back new and improved) part 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by diva08, Feb 26, 2002.

  1. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your head is wrapped in a shroud
    of ignorance
    i dread the way your mind has
    locked out any new way of thinking
    you are natural
    ly ugly
    you are conscious -- but still asleep

    you spout muslim philosophy
    desiring woman of purity
    not completely denouncing polygamy
    while nursing an STD
    and munching on a bacon cheeseburger from wendy's

    where's your common sense
    or do u reject it because its called
    "common" ?

    if u call a sister my sister
    and try to get up in her without an official nod before God
    isn't that incest?

    how can u look for a SOUL mate
    when you can never be a WHOLE mate
    because in GETTING a PIECE of *** you
    GAVE a PIECE of your soul
    correct me if i'm wrong but doesn't that make u --- incomplete?

    i'm sure u expected something erotic
    you want to get off on that verbal tip
    because u haven't mastered the art of
    mental mastubation yet

    foreplay -
    a decent conversation without you repeating unoriginal philosophies but with u letting ur heart speak its language of truth

    copulate to the thought of.....
    oooh.. a diploma... mmmph... a masters -- a phd -- aaahhh common sense .... oh goodness... a job .. your own place... oh yeah ... a car ... humility ... understanding ... (oh GOD) compassion... no kids .... MONOGAMY ... COM... COM... COMM...
    COMMITMENT

    and i bask in the afterglow of having learned something positive from u

    u talk about spirituality and religion and blah dee blah
    the only time u quote the Bible is to say
    "wives submit to their husbands" but u
    leave out the part about the man submitting to God
    ie
    the rest of the Bible

    i wouldn't mind following you but you're like a dog chasing its own tail so that would mean i'm follosing an *** and if i am
    the queen that you call me
    i'm better than what you have to offer so..

    come back
    at the culmination
    of your
    matriculation
    and at your coronation....

    then..
    you can be the king to this queen



    diva08 (c) 2002
    i know it dont rhyme but its actually a spoken word piece and i coudn't put it up on spoken word thingy
     
  2. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wb Ms Diva. Good seeing you again. Your ink is strong as ever.

    BE
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woRRDDD

    Diva08 done stepped back into the house...rocking ****. step to the stage, my sistah...tell us what we need to know so that we might grow into the KINGS you expect us to be.

    loving this.

    but, does this mean that, coz i hang out on the corner...i can't be a corner of your foundation...can't build a kingdom of growth, with you as my soul. does it mean that we--that is, you and i--can't live for tomorrow...together. if i offer you my corner...held up from my childhood...will you take me to the river...show me love and life and give me the mountain. come to my fountain, you QUEEN of my mental...i wanna show you some THINGS.:) by the way, excuse my STD...it was an early thing that i got caught up in and just can't get ova.
     
  4. diva08

    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank y'all for the love. nice welcoming present.

    and baller -
    "the stone the builders rejected shall be the cornerstone..."

    if u can understand that
    education
    from a woman is no attempt at
    emasculation
    but in fact is
    inspiration
    and
    motivation
    that leads to that mentioned
    coronation

    we might be able to twerk something

    d08
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DIVA!!!! YOU RING WITH A NEW FIRE AND ANOINTING WITH THIS ONE HERE!!!!!!

    BISHOP STANDS UP AND APPLAUSE!!!!!

    WAITING FOR MORE!!!!!!!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sista! Welcome back. I have missed your scribes my dear! Thank you for this today; looking forward to more!!!!

    peace and blessings

    a
     
  7. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    & she return with a bang!!!!!

    welcome home diva

    pd :)
     
  8. adefinitediva

    adefinitediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Diva08,
    I haven't been a member very long, so I don't know any of your previous works. However, this one is so cool! It rocked me . . . literally.
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa

    i felt this to this 10th power :toast:
     
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