Black Poetry : P's and Q's

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He's on his best behavior
    with his
    "socially proper conduct"~
    that sits
    on the left and right sides of him...
    ...and the Laws of
    Physics done
    Pseu-do-morphed him...into...a
    Poetic laureate or...better yet-- he's a
    Perfectly
    Positive
    Prose-filled
    PSUEDONYM - exquisite; excellence and a
    Powerful hymn -(him)

    but
    WAIT~

    ...cause... that's where I came in...

    ...........I..........

    Questioned him....because I couldn't
    Quantifiably measure him ~ ~ could not comprehend?
    ....I looked up the
    Quantum theory of his B.E.I.N.G and took a leap-of-faith
    ....when I made love to him
    ....and then ~he~ turned ...N2...
    ...Matter and Energy from physical interactions made from a liquified QUASI~ times two
    ...Quasi you ...absorbed
    ...Quasi me moisture
    Quasistellar Objec-(sex)-tivity indeed - it was; it is
    (reader; are you followin' me)
    ...immensed energies emitted from us
    ...I liked
    ...I loved it - better
    ...when we be(came) .......both
    ...our manners, made good, when he was on
    his P's
    and I on top of
    my Q's
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Umm Hmm...but...

    I'd like it mo betta if ya was on G's and Q's!!!! :wink:

    Nice flow as usual N2!!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    G's & Q's - eh?!
    That can be arranged... :)
    Just say whennnnnn~~

    Thx a million sweetie!!
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    metaphysically

    followed your work here,

    loving your ART work here
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja

    Glad you :heart: this piece!
    Gracias se'nior!!
     
  6. freedom

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    very nice
     
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    N2 muh mental...

    **** ma ya **** is so ova da edge it's crazy!!! my words wont compliment this one enough love but know dat im diggin it!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Freedom

    thanks!!
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas~

    Aye papi :laugh:

    Am certainly happy
    to know this piece
    did the trick for ya!!
    Put you on your P's & Q's
     
  10. PhWbrown

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    Did we go to the same school?

    I'm glad you invited me to
    read - isn't this called
    "shock poetry", if so
    I need "shock therapy"
    girl - I'm fizzle-fried luv.
    (Can you say s.i.n.g.l.e.)-I can!