Black Poetry : Prozac, The Mack & The Whack Attack

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Sep 18, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 29, 2001
    Messages:
    2,922
    Likes Received:
    83
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    Counselor
    Location:
    mid-atlantic
    Ratings:
    +85
    ramblings from the hope chest...


    (For Ladies A & V)

    My 8-course meals musta
    been insufficient….maybe
    my thighs failed to provide
    enough nourishment
    for his ***…

    I was just talking to my girl…..
    and, see, I don’t usually bash
    my brothaz….always
    have their backs
    and she know this…
    because I realize that
    we women have so much
    to do with formulating a
    man’s behavior toward
    women…. his woman…
    I mean, this is the smack
    I preach on a daily....

    so, see, I wasn’t trynna
    really put my man down
    or nothing

    you know, I be allowing him
    his space....when he need
    to get his relax on w/out
    my estrogen-based
    disruptions, you feel me...

    but shoooooo, brotha
    in some real funky doo-doo
    now

    I mean, here I am
    educated
    employed
    fine-*** brown
    ready, willing and especially able
    to go all the way down….

    and... his... ***!!!

    HIS ***!!!!!!

    ova dere creepin wit a…
    wit a…
    bald-headed,
    4-eyeded
    bow-legged
    buck-tooth-ted
    butt ugly
    four-baby-daddy-havin

    HO
    on
    the County AND
    PROZAC!!!!!!!!!???????


    shooooooo!!!!!
    maybe a sista needta
    catch a mental issue &
    bust my own ****
    whack attack!!!



    Alyce, (c) 2001

    From "The Woman In My Attic"
     
  2. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 20, 2001
    Messages:
    52
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +1
    I ain't mad

    atcha, sis! :D

    (eight courses???; DAYUM M M M M!!!!!!)


    LMBAO

    :wink:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    Alyce gurlllll!!

    that woman in da attic brings some hel-la-va ****
    to da table and thoses many tymes wow!!!!
    bad flow here fo sho; sistah Queen A)):D :kiss:
     
  4. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 11, 2001
    Messages:
    712
    Likes Received:
    3
    Location:
    Atlanta, GA
    Ratings:
    +3
    GGGUUURRRLLL friend !!!

    lay it down for those who don't know Ms A !!!!!
    sometimes our men just don't know how to act !!!

    :D
     
  5. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 3, 2001
    Messages:
    645
    Likes Received:
    1
    Ratings:
    +1
    Dayuuuuuummmmmm you steady bringin it taday!!!!!!!!

    That woman in the attic is toooooooo ruffffff & stufffffff!!!!!!!!!

    She's got so much schitt stored up in there..she might just stay up there for an eternity...rustling through her old shoes...necklaces that use to hang her...the ones she no longer wears...and those old clothes of longevity...cos' fashion always repeats itself...so many other items up there..on her shelf...not to mention the treasures in her box....

    yeah sistagirl...stay in the attic until you have said everything that needed to be said...u hear me?? Breathe....and then speak your last breath...

    *LadyA66*

    :toast:
     
  6. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 17, 2001
    Messages:
    1,312
    Likes Received:
    7
    Location:
    under the sun
    Ratings:
    +7
    this piece sure has some attitude...
    any man messes with you..well they'd just be dancin with the devil...this one gives off a great mental image...

    K
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    dang

    alyce
    he ain't deserve your time

    please

    you got it going on
    and deserve respect
    so get yours


    DSSNY
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    tight drop...speak on release it
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    1,424
    Likes Received:
    12
    Occupation:
    student
    Location:
    da south............ATL
    Ratings:
    +12
    This was a tyte drop sistah if I eva read one. It spoke with so much truth and sincerity. Yo, I got to give you your props for this one, fo' sure.
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    And the forum says, "Whoa"....and then, silence....LOL, that Alyce is something else, layin it on the line. Wonder where she is now?
     
Loading...