Black Poetry : proud

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by TotalView, Apr 15, 2012.

  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful black man
    my beloved brother
    watching you step
    beyond that white line
    drawn in the sand
    ready to lead
    not only with your words
    but a well thought out plan
    all this sister can do is smile
    and let you know I'm proud of you
    your sword my sword...
    your bone my bone...
    whatever this woman can do
    let me know
    because i'm right there
    standing beside you
     
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    I second that emotion :10200:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beautifully said and i'm honored to know thy woman black queen stand beside me
    for words can't express thy mission to become a warrior against corruption / crime and racial profiling
    my work is yet to begun for the future i may not see, but i will be felt between the lines of humanity
    fate has called me and I accepted thank you from my heart as we work abundantly.
    $$RICH$$
     
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    yes she stand besides me
    i will be your man and you be my wifey
    through thick and tin we will survive
    livin in truth,we refuse to live a lie
    our story is not a fairytale
    but it belongs in books
    the type movies are made of
    measured on a heavy scale
     
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    Brother Poet rapchild,

    Sweet. Thank you for adding your words.

    (smile)
     
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    Thanks much love.
     
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