Black Poetry : prophetic language pt 2

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Second coming
    Second connection
    Second meeting
    But first in line
    For more.
    Recognition given with time
    For now replays and rewinds are on my mind
    Stop… pause... zoom... ooohh wait
    And wait.. now play..
    Play over and over..
    Until the next
    Communion.
    Charged up ammunition
    Desire in one hand
    Devotion and lust the other
    ready for target practice

    and yet
    divine as these feelings seem
    and concrete as the pleasure is
    abstract are our figures
    and his presence in my life
    interjected moments of bliss
    can never compare to those missed
    holding on to my mental
    sessions of us
    'his lips
    and his hips
    the softness of my kiss
    the ooooh's
    the aaaaah's the minutes
    stops in time
    happiness last seconds
    long lasting preference
    replay this essence
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, the blissful moments that replay in our minds. We never quite know when those recollections will hit us...making us forget ourselves for a moment. Flow on poetess.
     
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    prohpetic indeed..........

    memory is a beautiful thing, nice scribe...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    take your clothes off

    it's hot in here

    lol
     
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    Yeaaa girll I was diggin this..You don't need to replay the moment anymore though baby I'm right here...lol
    :yo:
     
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    Can I sumb up how I feel with this? whewwwwwwwwwwwww
     
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    getting naked round here whewwwwww
     
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    thnkx for the love

    thanks everyone for the love and the read...

    watz - u always come w the great words
    info-memory is def a gift and a curse... but at this moment.. the gift is surely at work.. stay blessed
    Da Street So'ja & LURK- yall silly.. guess i turned the temp up in here.. thanks for the read
    AgAbus & $$RICH$$- all i can say is glad yall made pass part 1
     
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