Black Poetry : Prophecy and Verbs( vintage recital)

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***I want to take this week I was so graciously given to share my older stuff.
    My aim is to give you all a better all around glimpse of this poet you all are so graciously honoring. This particular poem is a recital poem. Written in '98
    Hope you enjoy!


    Restrained by mental prisons
    And superficial shells
    Unapologetic as we descend
    To a neverending Hell
    Unfeeling grins hide the terror of an unknown fate
    Morality loses its value
    When love is challenged by hate

    Degenerate mind reach up for ground
    and be devoured by the abyss
    Of self destruction and over indulgence
    and your personal god who is amiss
    Live vicariously through broken dreamers
    become one with their broken dreams
    Sing along to the Devil's song
    for nothing's as bad as it seems :look:
    Hear the truth, believe the lies
    train your ears to receive the error
    Ignore righteous men's persuasion
    and behold the Lord's terror

    We're in the Revelation of Genesis
    and in the Genesis of Revelation
    The era of prophetic utterances
    the end of hedonistic civilization!

    Lost souls roam and restless hearts probe
    infinity is a sigh of relief(depending on which road you chose)
    And the definition of Heaven
    is the end of chaos and strife
    And no man tastes it without dying
    So life is death and death is life!
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: Wow, this was Real, I likes
     
  3. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As real as it comes in fact. Thanks for peeping the flow.
    I also appreciate yours
     
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    Brah..."Where do I sign up?"

    I am Officially a "TWISION FOLLOWER"...
    Lead me Brother...Lead me..and I will "read"...

    and this is why...


    Scribe on brother...Exhume the hidden scrolls of the Twision Soul...
    I'm bidding...
     
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    This vintae piece was deep, the roads that we choose to take...thanks for sharing.
     
  6. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again...I'm so humbled

    ANGELICSAGE- I look forward to your comments. You're one of my primary inspirations here. I thank you ao much...probably more than my words can express

    WATZINANAME- Thank you too my sister. You always seem to get my poetry. That's priceless to me......missing your posts!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u really droppin it correct
    flow on poet of the week
     
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    WOW!
    I agree with everyone
    on this one!
    no doubt about it,
    This here is tyte!
     
  9. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$- MY BROTHER....THANK YOU. tHE LOVE YOU SHOW IS HIGHLY APPRECIATED!

    Purplemoons- Thank you as well. I hope to drop some more vintage stuff on you all byt the time i get off work....be looking out for me as I will be for you!
     
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    very deep poem to wait the mental into a thought of how the two are indeed different but yet the same
    keep the flow coming poet
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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