Black Poetry : PROPER SAVAGERY

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  1. Jazzytude

    Jazzytude Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PROPER SAVAGERY

    Sure I can be a lil more discrete... but I'm in tha zone and my body can't take anymore heat.

    Yes, most times I want slow and passionate love...but tonight I want to show you what a real savage is made of!!!..know what I mean...

    So stop hiding behind that computer screen...Az of right now I dare you to make me scream Nuts but not in my dreams...

    You...naaaw...let me say that again...YOU always telling me what I should read...fo sho...lil intellectual with our enter sexual... key logging my body's every move is your need...

    Yeah Yeah Yeah but tonight it's your body's soul movements... I want to receive...then off your brain I will feed...I assure you it's not greed this hunger is really a plead...

    My body's computer is running slow... I need a powerful hard drive... this will be a live upgrade show...for us to enjoy and grow!!!

    Herbs, alcohol, fruits and crushed ice...depends on how you get down... the mission is to eliminate frowns and knock off pounds... with no regards to the animalickstick sounds...after this I will know your fermions like a hound...

    Wooo... hold on baby...all that...let me get some oil so that even if you hit the sides you'll still get every nunu and crack...Yes that's it baby...HANDLE THAT!!!

    Punish, Please and Tease me Boo make me appreciate the god in You...Remember tonight I'm a savage and I gots to have it...Me want it All!!! ...bang this drum make the rain fall.

    Now I know what I just said might turn your head but to satisfy me... you have to be a Beast in bed...And If this turns you off than you can bounce... I need a man who enjoys giving every inch and ounce ...

    Tomorrow I'm gonna show some class...candle lit poetry recital... by the fireplace... while you lick my proper ***... You see this sweetie needs creativity... if this is gonna last!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Now dat was some hot Jazzy steam what a tale this will be ......continue on please!
     
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    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was like....WHOA!
     
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    You got my respect poet, I' ain't even mad at cha ...
    Need I say, a roll of fire bounced from that pen ...Great piece!!:great:
     
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    SHAKE IT FAST

    BUT WATCH YOSELF
    SHAKE IT FAST
    SHOW EM WHAT YA WORKIN WIT!!!!!


    :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
    Now that was JAZZY with a definite TUDE*





    M.E.
    :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed the creativity and structure of this piece, perfect title too, flow on ahead poet.
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    allrighty then....


    one love
    khasm
     
  8. Jazzytude

    Jazzytude Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK

    I put it back up !!!.........Enjoy!
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    aiight then...
    i'm not the biggest erotic fan...that's just me...
    but i got into this joint because of the rhyme scheme...
    this piece flowed nicely in my mental...
    don't be skurred of flow like that...word

    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    back on da block with what's hot
    your creativity is awesome and how you
    bring it to life poeticly love it
     
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