Black Poetry : Pronouns, Simple Math & Time

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earl, Jul 15, 2003.

  1. Earl

    Earl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I = me all alone without you.
    Us - The relationship we don`t have.
    We + The dates we never had.
    Them (X) multiplied by the children we have yet to make.
    Today /divided/ by our lifetime apart.
    Tomorrow ........is still yet to come.
    So,.... we still have the rest of infinity.....to add up^ the
    $um..........of our love.
     
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    Brilliantly posed! So unique! loved it!
     
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    i liked this piece...
    good one
    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    too sweet
    da total love of heart
     
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    Oh! how original..........mathematician of Love. Nice flow
     
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