Black Poetry : Promised body

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PROMISED BODY

    I know you have someone else
    But you never promised wedding bells
    But remember your promise to me
    You promised me your body
    If you don’t remember,
    let me remind you,

    I’m lying on the bed thirsting for you
    I’m in my honey-covered body
    Lying my head right below your waist
    My teeth began to pry your buckle loose
    Feel my lips replace the label on your jeans from FUBU to for you

    I’m tasting the mocha blends of your sexual
    And I hope I don’t overdose
    Before riding on all the angles of Nestle’s rope
    Feel my thighs steal secrets your body hides

    We stay intertwined to rewind so no spots were missed
    Our breathless moans would make the CD skip
    As you promised me you would never quit
    I don’t know what my body would do without you
    I want to spend the rest of my body with you

    You got me looking for you around dark corners
    Like crack addicts,
    I need the first and last hit from you
    You promised,
    You promised,
    And she’s so dam**** mad at you
    Cause you promised my body
    You promised to never leave me wet and lonely
    You promised to always save a little for me
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister that was sexually soothing
    Deep poet sensual I love it
    Do your thang poet
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love it .
     
  4. cursed heart

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    Thank you Tantrum boo:thanks:
    Thank you Ibrahim:flirt:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    get your share
    this was very well done sis.
     
  6. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :ilu: Thank you brother Rich
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHHHOOOOOAAAA!!!
    I love this!!
    I like the concept of this.
    "U promised me yr body".
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can so relate to this joint flow on cursed heart.:wave:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sweet baby_face and nevar:kiss2: :kiss2:
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoaaaaa!!! WELL DONE SIS!!!!:hearts1:
     
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