Black Poetry : Promise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LadyBelle, Nov 16, 2008.

  1. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is an intimate bond
    Between the Earth and the sun
    They both exist for and
    Exclusively for one another
    The earth as beautiful as she is
    Needs the sun to compliment her elegance
    For the sun to tell her with warmth
    Of his smile upon her face
    How lovely she is
    She being the woman, she gives him
    The sun
    The sweetest gift of all
    She tells him softly
    That she needs him
    And with that
    Their intimacy is sealed
    For another day
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A match made from heaven the two go hand n' hand to it's alter in da spool of foreverness
    lovely scribe ya pen has much to say .....
     
  3. LadyBelle

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    Thank you Rich, I love the idea of this type of intimacy. Thanks for feeling me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome as days shine upon tis earth we so will scribe the emotions of it's exsitance
     
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    I've always loved the beauty of the stars, the moon, the sun..etc
    I love how you brought it all together in poetic form and when
    used in metaphors of the intimacy between man & woman.

    well, thats just beautiful...flow on Sista Ladybelle.

    o..btw, welcome to Destee's

    Epiphany:heart:
     
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    o, but for the moon...

    yes...i've been watching you two
    earth and sun
    with your feathery kisses
    and other things you've done
    like...when the powder puff clouds float by
    you try
    to dismiss them
    by calling on the elements
    to blow them away
    but everyday
    they return to annoy you
    'tis true
    you be coexisting
    in the existence of my absence
    but i sense a change on the horizon.

    as the river flows...
     
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    jus_dat_nice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i really love this
    It's the perfect example of eternal love
     
  8. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    LadyBelle,
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hmmm

    different way of looking at things

    i like the depth here
    the vision
    the spirit

    very well expressed

    and very well received

    welcome to Destee's poet
     
  10. LadyBelle

    LadyBelle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW! Rich, Baller, Da Street So'ja, Clyde, jus_dat_nice, and epiphany

    Thank you kindly for your uplifiting words. No words can express my gratitude. I look forward to reading and being feed by you all. I am speechless thank you again.
     
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