Black Poetry : Promiscuity

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A girl set parameters

    To challenge my stamina

    Before I examined her aim

    She asked me to lavish her

    With jewelry then marry her

    As if my stick were INSANE ~

    With nary a play of my game

    She measured the WIDTH of my fame

    Calculating promiscuous behavior :SuN030:

    ALIVE AND WELL in my brain...



    Darryl Abdu Omari aka 1poetsought
    Copyright 2009 :em0200:
     
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    Um... Nice! Keeps me wondering! I like that!
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, dear

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Truth!




    1poetsought,

    You got my vote, for real...great write poet, well said indeed.

     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Sir

    :peace:
     
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    Peace 1poet:
    And Welcome....
    Nice to read you again missed your
    signature poetic flair.


    Much Peace & Luv,
    :heart:4EVER
     
  7. MRS. LADY

    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    so nice to c u

    Before he examined my aim

    He found a spot to lavish his pain

    Although anger and rage were his aim

    He pump'd dreams of seeds in my head

    Like fantasies are made in the bed

    Lookin for love and just life

    He remembered the one who went for money and wife

    He measured the width of his pain

    And then he gave me the same

    He calculated all of the games

    and forgot Me

    Alive and well on this plane...

    A man came along to invent

    The love I originally sent

    they all

    forgot what that meant

    (u know the 2's and the 5's)

    they think i respond to spoken scribes enticed

    when my duty is to cipher back life

    i'll never tell them my name

    that's why they need a devil to blame

    when really it's all in their hearts

    everything that i am not

    she is the promiscuity

    i am the promise of unity

    she tried to re-arrange

    but i remain

    the same same

    self



    :love:

    i do love you

    Ma'at Hotep
     
  8. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!

    Nice response Miss Lady, very nice.

     
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    wow got me thinking!
     
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    THANKS

    4EVERLUV, nevar, MISS LADY, BRO. CLYDE, and the silent majority of readers,

    Thank you all. :geek:
     
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