Black Poetry : Progression of Love through Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NapturallyYours, Jul 26, 2007.

  1. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Share love through Poetry with me?
    I’ll take you into my realm so you can flow with me
    Are you ready for the telepathy,
    Mind-merging energy, synchronizing our heart beats to the rhythm of our words?
    Willing to ride this wave of discovery? Let’s fly.

    Rhyme with me?
    Layback relax as my words take maximum effect
    Sending shivers up and down your back
    Palpitations of your heart may cause an attack
    But it’s OK Baby, I know you like it like that

    Word play with me?
    Lip service for two
    A combustion of sensuous flavor
    Marinated with verbs and adjectives for you to savor
    Pour the rhyme wine for a toast to this most delicious celebration of Collaboration

    Dream with me?
    Close your eyes as we lay
    The synergy of minds creating dreamgasms,
    Fantasies colliding with the reality that we’re both right here, in the moment
    Our bodies intertwined in a never-ending ying and yang…

    Dang baby….Be with me?
    For today, for tonight, for forever
    Knowing that even as I say these words
    I want more than this, to never miss a day of you, of your bliss
    Your lips that deliver such delicate kisses I become delirious

    Spend your life with me?
    A vow seeking to seal our creatively spun story
    And what God has brought together
    Let no Man put asunder
    As we continue our Progression of Love through Poetry


    ©NapturallyYours
    July 26, 2007
     
  2. Yemoja'sGoddess

    Yemoja'sGoddess Banned

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    WOW

    Queen,

    Lovin' everything about this poetress! Man, I could feel the intensity in this write. Flow on , Keep on...
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The power of this write gained strength with each line, as did the beauty of envisioning love progressing through poetry. This was awesome poetess!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin da progression of this kinda love poeticly thank u sis for sharing
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling the love poet

    feeling the love

    and

    the poetry

    peace:qqb015:
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    wow...
    I really like this one...
    the opening wordplay was just exquiste. just a stunning opening stanza. i felt invited to a private world...

    this one just kept rising and rising
    climax.

    phenomenal write.
     
  7. NapturallyYours

    NapturallyYours Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :qqb018: Ya'll really be making me blush! Thanks for all of the comments and the love!


    Napturally
     
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