Black Poetry : Probably Just Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticdelight, Mar 13, 2002.

  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    i had the right to relay
    its travisty

    peace be to the middle
    east where war spreads
    dreaded catastrophy

    bloodshed cries humanity
    whom have reached the verge
    of insanity

    having the right to relate
    creativity

    this world overwhelming
    humble majesty

    has the right to relay
    its travisty

    whose next involved
    for the hot seat like
    a cop beating on Rodney
    King

    heaven knows why
    "the cage bird sings"

    in a world filled with
    turmoil spilling constantly
    like coffee beans

    Maxwell House stripped
    and ripped by the seams

    of its values not in need
    to devalue as its country
    continues to "scower" you

    instead of showering you and me
    with love praying to GOD above
    to send his messengers and
    peace white doves

    ending this world of its travisty
    has nothing to do with you

    it's probably just me





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  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "bloodshed cries humanity
    whom have reached the verge
    of insanity" This here is Tyte!!
    It's a shame to what is happening in the world today while the world only lets us know what it wants us to know.
    Nice flow Poet!!
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ditto Rashad. pd wrapping world events up in creative artistry on piece-work shards...and doing it well.

    continue your flow.
     
  4. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very well done, pd! Enjoyed the read. :)
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PD,

    Excellent!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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