Black Poetry : pro-viding you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by j'hiah, Aug 27, 2003.

  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    providing you...

    breezes in August heat
    plus
    a kiss cool as an ice cream treat..
    raspberry oil massages on your feet
    looking like...
    they demand red carpets...
    what?
    suddenly comes the night
    choose
    light blue or red light
    maybe you need to hear me say
    that everything is going to be alright
    l have..
    no fright
    other than
    me not being your man and you my woman
    for life...
    finally my promise to you
    and commitment provided...
    let's go out and have fun
    and show them
    the meaning of the moon and sun...
    provided that...
    you will rise and set with me
    as l pop the big question
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this is real right here man...
    the way it should be
    between two that share eternal glee
    tyte
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u hit it on the head
    tyte as can be ..............
    two doing it right
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so beautiful :)
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautifully crafted

    raspberry oil massages, light blue or red light,
    the meaning of the moon and sun... popping the question
    just some of my favorite parts

    You set the stage for a "perfectly romantic night"
    this was like butter........nice work!
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a beautiful picture you created
     
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