Black Poetry : Privitizing

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  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't even want to be
    On the list of what to say
    Always wanting to be
    Face to Face though
    Privitizing needing a way to be private
    While the need for me is @ the start of the fight
    Advantage is not my being
    Always being seen
    Why you gotta hold me down?
    Giving me the bell sound as the sun goes down
    Let me Rush
    Don't wanna be crushed the next morning
    The privacy clause is hush hush written underneath
    But after the act is explained
    Falling 4 it just takes that
    For them to begin having free labor for the
    free America
    Took my Son here in America
    STILL Daily comes the sealer (sailor) (saler)
    Telling the way of defining quietly
    Making reality
    Buying realtor of life being that Wall Street
    Defined, Act that profit out amongst our feit.
    Now leave me off that list
    Written on the Wall of neglectful measures done
    by those that enlist
    My private body for their profit
    Sure America is built on profit & lost
    My Sons only get the lost come dark though.
    Cause of the fist strength we all come together to say.
     
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    No words
    Excellent, is the best I can do to describe this

    This wordplay melted my mind, and then spread it out like butter over a slice of my heart.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *interesting*
     
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    That's the same thing I was thinking. Had to do it like it is.
    Thank You for your sentiment!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa............very well displayed and stated
     
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    Thank You!